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Shawnik_DeFontes 08-26-03 01:26 PM

"Driving Me Crazy" first song ever
 
This is really the first song I ever completed entirely by myself.. i allowed one of my artists from Public Nucents to jump on here in the third verse juss cuz he had some ish to say to his wife.. anyway.. lemme kno whatchu think n if its worthy of droppin on

"Driving Me Crazy" - Lo-Fi

"Driving Me Crazy" - Hi-Fi

Shawnik_DeFontes 08-26-03 04:58 PM

uppin.. come on wit da feedbacc

...OpeY... 08-27-03 02:33 AM

feelin this beat... on the intro u overdid it just a little bit on the reverb. the vocals are too low. u should spit with more emotion too. i think if u went back n fixed it, it would be a smooth track fa sho. it just needs better production. good beat choice for a love trck. its dope. keep it up and keep this shit in mind next time.

C-NiCe 08-28-03 10:35 AM

the beat is crazy...i'm definitely feelin this beat....yea like split said before, your vocals are too low on the delivery, and i dunno if its just me, but this looks and sounds like a fast pace rappin beat....like sumtin you should be rappin a bit faster, then rhymin laid back and slow....did you ever think about it??....well i dunno just sum i thought about while i was hearin it .....the hook was ok, maybe you should pick up the volume on your voice a little so it can match up the beat...this was a good track, just fix wat needs to be fixed and you set to go.....OnE






I'm Ghost...

Shawnik_DeFontes 09-01-03 01:37 PM

thankz guys n-e more suggestions?

Thugsicle 09-01-03 09:21 PM

beat is tight
flow and delivery is strait for ur first song
nice shit
production is ok
overall nice track
Peace

ninemillimeter 09-01-03 09:54 PM

this shit's ok. Step ya vocals up and it will be kewl


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