listen 2 this
 

ok I'm hooked on this rap shit ever since i put in my gats clip
watch brains splat
all over the mat

59
thats to symbolize the amount of rye before
I'm trippin as i watch my conciousnous slippin
while whatch my old folk flippin
the bird whatchin coke adicts shout WYRD

but cokes not my style I like the crack but the pigs won't let me relax maybe they need a good stab in the back
peeps say my shits whacked

but thats not so my steady flow comes from that of a F**king
skitso but wit 2 mind i can spit shit better than busta rymes wailin
on the wind chimes scratchin up money 4 a dime

your sig says alot more than it should...

im trying to find a flow or a concept but i just couldnt. Ill just evaluate the rest of it. The flow was hard because the bars were no where near the same size, the whole 59 line lost me. Lets play to your strenghts:

your better than me

1/10

sorry :(

man.. that flow was madly brutal... maybe it would make a low qual audio, but the text just killed it.. i wasn't getting the concept or flow either.. I advise ya just read cyphers and battles with some vets to see some examples of good shit.

up ya skillz and gl,

-Ie