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werd...help an ill vote on this shyt later...peace

save tha rappers...by placin ur vote today u can save tha record of one of 2 rappers...please help tha cause...


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...5392#post735392

checkin in.......dont need dat much time ima keystyle yo ass within the hour!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

...........straight keystyle........holla at your boy..........

aiyo,
You spitten a battle verse at me?! you kiddin-me-right?/
Sorry "Mr ABC",but ya chance of losin to me is bigga-then-life/
I'll shoot tecks at ya vest and bisect-ya-chest/
Rip out ya lungs and throw em back at U so you can catch ya breath/
Spittin flames at ya grill,causin ya face-ta-melt/
You betta act like a orthodontist wit fucked up teeth and brace yourself/
Kid I'll remove ya muscles,depleting-all-ya-bulk/
Shove ya heart in a orange juice carton jus to say I beat-you-to-a-pulp/
This just half tha onslaught and you already dying-fast/
Cuz i'll put tha metal to ya face like you tha man wit da iron mask/

ONE........................

Ill Bust Shots At Ya Head And Fill Ya Mind Wit "Empty Hints"/
Saturate Your Brain Wit Ammo & Metal From "Hollow Tips"/
My Scripts Hit This Dim-Wit Darkening Vision Like His Eyes Had Tint/
You Could "Spit Flint At Septics" And Still Wouldnt Be Able To "Spark Shit"/
This Battle Is A Walk "Waisted" Like Bein "Cut Above" The "Legs"/
Your At A Loss Kid "Face it",Like Parapelegics Getting Head/
I "Spit Classiscs","Keyin In" Hits Like A "Pianist"/
"Committ To Celibacy" Kid Cause Theres No Way Your "Beatin This"/
Stick To "Cliff" Notes To Make Your Scripts Seem Suspenseful/
Commin At Me With A Pencil...This Kiddy's Gotta Be Mental/

Focus'd: mr abc.... what was that???? it was all good but my vote goes to neither of yous cus i cant vote??

^^free posting herb...abd was directed at his name mr alphabet
punches-alpha
metas-focus
flow-alpha
wordplay-alpha
personals-focus not by much
vocab-alpha
ima have to go with alpha on this tho....better overall verse in my opinion
vote=alpha.......peace
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=75712

Yo that braces line, that is the third time tonight ive seen it tonight not the same wording but tha same meaning..... but now to tha vote'n

punches-alpha
metas-focus
flow-alpha
wordplay-alpha
personals-focus
vocab-alpha
vote=alpha

but i will say that focused had better structure and his shit is off tha hook

punches.ALPHA
metas.none realy
multies.nun
wordplay..ALPHA
overall.Alpha

o and flow.Both

dis was pretty close, PAYCE

3-0 me...uppin this
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Second Time

free posting herb...abd was directed at his name mr alphabet
punches-alpha
metas-focus
flow-alpha
wordplay-alpha
personals-focus not by much
vocab-alpha
ima have to go with alpha on this tho....better overall verse in my opinion
vote=alpha.......peace

and please go peep the mc thrilla vs krem battle its gettin slept on aight niggas holla

[QUOTE]Originally posted by mc thrilla
[B]free posting herb...abd was directed at his name mr alphabet
punches-alpha
metas-focus
flow-alpha
wordplay-alpha
personals-focus not by much
vocab-alpha
ima have to go with alpha on this tho....better overall verse in my opinion
vote=alpha.......peace

werd^^^^...........

...yep....