I was bored when i wrote this
 

::music intro::

Its J...Day....

Hahaha....

Aiyyo fuck y'all hatin
ass motherfuckers...

Look...

::flow::
I'll come through wit 9
pointed at ur dome
So u start cryin like a
bitch and beg to go home
I'll use a shotty or
an AK47
Like Im holdin up
A Russian 7-11
DOA Nigga bustin
out da pen
And I got tha pen guards
cluckin like a hen
If u want a true spitta
then get at me dawg
Instead sittin around
starin atcha dawg
This is art Up
in my cart....
If u lookin for flows
Den go to tha Rappin Mart
Spittin mean shit that'll
offend ya moms
But I dont give a fuck
Cause Im droppin bombs
Stay in ur place if u
know whats good for ya
But if u wanna test me,
then thats tha hood for ya
I show u hatin ass niggaz
what Im really about
U flowin betta than me?
I highly doubt
U lil whack cats need
to fuckin stop droppin
Cause u only got hobo's
and bums coppin
Wit tha shit u spit
U neva bed hoppin
U dont get girls so how da
fuck u cherry poppin?

How is that, nigga?....

Punk ass bitches....

Holla at me...

4-1-2...

Its ya nigga...

::music fades::

Leave ya feedback. Any type. Dont matter. Nothin aint gettin me down on my bday. Lataz.

i can tell u had punches but they weren't organized correctly so they were hard to follow as was tha flow as a whole just organize it and it will get betta

oh and by tha way happy b-day and shit dawg, u go get laid or sumtin

lol thanx man

i agree.......................structure ya shit betta and u'll b on ur way............

whack, sorry to say but i thought dat was whack in my opionion. you may have shot a gun, but have you shot someone? no?, i dont mind people talk about guns unless there creative and use it as a metaphorical term. gangster music has fucked up da kids minds dese dayZ lol

Actually i have uk kid. and if its so whack, lemme see sum of ur shit lol.

and i dont even say nothin bout shootin sum1 lol. maybe ur thinkin has got fucked up uk kid.