This is dedicated to most everyone here...
 

Smokin this pipe has my mind hype cuz I'm not the type to bring beef or gripe...
But ya'll don't act right and wanna net-fight cuz ya ain't seen the light or ain't very bright.
It's just ya young age that keeps ya engaged in cyberspace rage like this forum was caged...
Slow ya ass down before ya ass drown in dirt from the ground while prayers resound.
Ya got plenty of time to battle and rhyme, saddle up and shine, cuz life's song for you is still on it's opening lines.

That's ya'll not me, ya'll's sprouts I'm a tree with my branches supporting a wife and baby...
Most of ya'lls teens, I'm goddamn mid 30's, been gettin my hands dirty since before ya parents got flirty.
I spit my shit straight but I get alotta hate, I must irritate but it's cuz ya'll don't relate to my 69 birthdate...
Try readin my lines, checkin the format, they got sprinkles of everything, they ain't ya goddman doormat.
I throw in equals, punchlike disses cut with wordplay that never misses, flow on the go that always dismisses...
Metas that compare and cause despair, personals that sieze the lungs and stop the air.
Bringin complexity with current events, spittin history at ya for educational supplement.
I can do most anything with a pen or PC, go freestyle or pre-write for a deadline to meet.
Diss from profiles or straight off the top, do it for fun or mean business with beef like I'm a butcher shop.

Ain't sayin I'm the best, I know I'm far from that...
But I've been robbed alot of victories like ya'll pulled a gat.
45 losses? People, please!
I'll admit to half, the rest are foul like disease.

Just read with fairness, it's all I ask...
Stop treatin my ass like I'm the kid in Mask.


Just needed ta vent some, people...
Hope it was at least enjoyable.
Peace

Nice Drop Check U'r Pm K?

hot shit dawg..................u wuz born to kill.............................keep dropp'n dem tight pieces...............1ne

that was tight..everyone should peep this...very good shit....

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=76220

Thanks for the feedback, peeps.

Much appreciated.

Anyone else?

you know that is all i can say you know

nice drop, ur flow is tyt wit ur rhymin sceme. keep it up
peace ~roX~

Much respect for spellingout for peeps like you did. Nice drop and I have always liked your work. Keep holding up that family and don't let these id's bring you down, cuz unlike you, when they reach your age, they wouldn't be able to balance it all. The game, the fam, the life, ya dig. Right now all out of control with hormones, but once they grow out of that, I'd like to see them hold down their home front and still handle their game...

Very good peice.....

Thanks Bounce...

Much respect back, dog.

I like this....

I like how you brought people into this rap without actually using names or anything. It was a really nice peice. Props to you man. I also like you bring the battle affect into open mic. lol. It was a great topic to choose. Vocab was very good. Your flow changed a lot though. I loved yo multi's. Nice work.

9/10

Thanks, Slik...

Means alot.

Seriously.

Peace