O.A.(RAISEN THE STATURE OF PUNCHLINES) for my ordo abacho fam
 

you really want it with CENTZ you can have it-
i make giving you ill lines a habit-till i foam at the mouth and turn rabid-
there alot of clones out there trying to get out of welfare so they bite like the sequel to LAKE PLACID-
seeing me is like seeing strait on 8 tabs of arabs acid-
my flows RAPIDS-
like i vibe-to typhoon tides-son im that type-
just for a cat to spit one of my raps require braces cause they overbite-
a meta4 plus meta4 means in 2 lines you get 8-(ate)
you vear to a whack crew better get it straight!
i produce rhymes at twice a SEIZURE'S heart rate-
im ahead of my time so if you herd this before that means you copped this to~late-
im one of the greats-but im sure you predicted i'd say that-
but if you got your opinion and stay quiet it just remains fact-
until some cat stops me... ill rip everyone on microphone-
the only time you can PUT ME IN MY PLACE is if you SOLD ME MY HOME-
i got the game SOWN but the seams must be TO TIGHT-
atleast thats what you fans yell once i get on the mic-
alot of you yap saying i battle rap to much....TRUE-
but im doing me...now if i was fucken with your name id be doing you-
im one of only a few m.c.'s that post a song a day-
and not one sucks i aint gay-
i keep it tight no matter what i say-
read the post count a thousand 5 and some change-
and everything a freestyle i should raise the wage-
DROP BARS i should do this only for kids the legal drinking age-
murder words and get BOOKED so much i should turn over a new page-every song i drop is a hot joint...my albums gonna be just blaze-
THE O.A.-we like a bad case of aids-in your immune system the way we invade.
YOU CATZ IS OBNISENT- yeah you in fected with my ACUTE microphone SYNDROME your IMMUNE system is DIFICIENT-

HOOK
and you wanna know why they call me NONCENTZ-
cause it makes none to be this ill constant-\
you wanna know why i rep the O.A.-
cause they the only cats like me what can i say-
real reconize real-
and if not im give the world a cavaty search how is that for something they can feel-

"a meta4 plus meta4 means in 2 lines you get 8"

^^^^ Liked That Line........

there were a handful of dope punches mixed in a pretty weak vocab and a lack of multis. you got one aspect down, good concept for a piece, just work on your vocab and multis.

great drop man...like the flow an the way you worded every punch it was great tight drop homie peace

johny get at me pop i wanna here more aboute what you meant

UPPIN

Nice drop word

This had some sick lines....kept the wordplay consistent

Dope

now that is OB to tha fullest

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that was some tite shit, flowed good good wordplay, but, yea work on multis

explain like what please help me out

u don't know wat multi's r?

this is a multi:

my demise won't be despised but fall on dry eyes/

demise, despised, dry, and eyes all rhyme while in tha same line/bar

jus work on it u'll get it

I WILL DO THAT

UPPIN

That was straight dog. nuff said

"a meta4 plus meta4 means in 2 lines you get 8-(ate)"

"im ahead of my time so if you herd this before that means you copped this to~late-"

nice..

yo if you worked on this ryme a bit more man this wuld have been mad tight but it seems like you are jus fucken lazy to up ya vocab and shit...use the threasure ma nigga ight and change some words and shit...work on em lines ova and ova again dont jus post...but from that i can tell you got mad skill..

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I FEEL POP AND I WILL DO JUST THAT THIS WAS DONE ONE TAKE ONE TYPE THAT IS IT I TYPE WHAT SERGES THROUGH ME AT THE TIME WQITHOUT THOUGHT IF I PAUSE THE IDEA MIGHT BE LOST SO I JUST DO BUT I WILL TRAIN MY MIND HARDER TO DO BETTER