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][\/][.O.B vs ViciousThoughts (should be good...)
Ok you know the rules, plus 200 or under cannot vote...
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Deal
^^^^Your Spittin First Right CUZ It was ur CallOuT^^^^^ .................................................. ..... |
Aight
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Your Whacked Out Of Your Mind; You Must've Been Drugged, Bitch Thinks He Can Beat Me,Your Just Talkin Shit You AintCapable Of//1
Slittin That Fake Suit Off With My Vilifying Speech, Underneath It's Nothin But a Midget Thinkin He's The "MOB" Unable To Speak//2 ViciousThought's Cuttin Up Your Brain, Wasn't Useful Anyway Cause Your Spit Would Have Died Invain//3 Go Fuck Off To a Mental Institution Your Mentally Insane, Your Spit and Flow have Gotta Go, They Hit Me Lighter Then Rain//4 Thought This Battle Would Be Tight Till You Came Around And Hexed It, It Aint No Challenge When Your Mentally Anarexic//5 ViciousThought's Enter Your Head Undetected, Searched For Your Brain But Never Found, Funny The MOB Boss Need's A Detective//6 Bitch Your Worked, Your Spit Will Be Dryer Then Fucken Dirt, I'm Out Bitch, and To Think The MOB Was Killed With Simple Thoughts of Merk//7 Fin... |
Uppin for The Mob To spit...
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Uppin :\ You ever gonna spit?
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Bitch you pussyin out?
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Look
We Rivals for eternity Vicious and Mob are Superman and Lex.....So i'll destroy Yo verse next cuz it was just "Pussy" Played-Text/ (Pronounced 'Paytex'-(Pussy Tampons) I bring more hype than Bachelor Parties wit a Variety of Style Keys......"People always Runnin back" to read these u can call my Lines "A Tease"/ (Get it) Contriplaitin Voctory to Me is Very Silly.....It aint in ya best Interest to Belieave but belieave this you Gettin Smoked like Phillies/ (philly: Joint) We all hate u like Carmen Does Kyle I can make you Cry louder than New Jail Arrivals.............West Nile couldnt Inject yo style wit Sickness so go ahead and Choke like 8 Mile/ Yellower than Snow wit Pee a losers wut You'll be......its like this battles bein handed to Me Free Like 1-800-C-O-L-L-E-C-T/ Spittin Ryhmes that Are Lies is wrong you a Fake Con comittin Sin......Woulda been better for u to "Bitch Out" like Donovin VS Michael Johnsin/ (Track match long time ago, every1 thought johnson backed out cuz he faked injury while runnin) Fuck Ya Wack Crew, I had a Spot Too but didnt take it cuz im better than all of You.........Co-Leader of T.I.C but your wack..... When u were promoted I dont think Hypnotik Knew/ (who knos y he made u co leader, prob didnt no u were wack) We aint on tha same level our Skill abilities very Much Vary.....yours are digustingly scary but Mine come Quick Like Sectretaries/ Like Italy wit Africa you bein Robbed Naked of everythin you Own.....U wouldnt be "Original" if 50 didnt Exist and it was Vicious who got Shot in tha Jaw Bone/! (His styles original, his accent helps that) Uppin this |
ill battle
punches: MOB flow: vicious metas: MOB vocab: MOB enjoyability: MOB ( because vicious vocab was so basic) vote = MOB good drop though both of you peace |
Whoa what the fuck MOB that was like fucken 20 lines dawg I said 10 max and that was atleast 20 man
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^^^^^^Lol Uppin Sum Tips on Flow^^^^^^
eed sum advice here ppl always say that and i lose in that Categorie everybattle uppin |
Don't make your shit so fucken long and put in only what count's man thats what win's battles punches not filler
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I didnt know the Rules on how many lines u wanted, u never posted them
And what are fillers? Stop complainin too peace |
yall hit this up...................................
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=76274 .................................................. ........................... |
Dude you fuckin accepted in my battle thread and didn't read the rules? filler is parts of lines that don't really need to be included to get the effect of the punch such as... "your whack" that right there is filler and just shows that the person who uses that is whack them selves, and I'm not tryin to complain about anything but you broke the rules that you didn't even read...
hahahha that's pretty funny actually |
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