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trippin59 08-27-03 11:35 PM

high
 
i'm high as fuck
too drunk to drive my truck
2 much speed feel as I'll never O.D.
never seen so clearly
PCP feel so free
LSD scared 2 be
alive about 2 take a nose dive
2 think this is all a crime
watch all tha pigs come outta the hive
time to make love 2 my 37 wives
need 2 AK-47's
lets c how many die
it funny that this ain't a lie
lets c if i can make a grown man cry
guess how many motherfuckers get caught in my drive bys
how much crack B4 i get shot in the back it gonna happen like shit after exlax but all I can do is relax

Am At Cha 08-27-03 11:58 PM

hmm... let me see

flow was easy to find but just for presentation purposes you should fix it up. The vocab was VERY simple... and my pet peeve
is usless number:

B4

LSD scared 2 be
alive about 2 take a nose dive
2 think this is all a crime
watch all tha pigs come outta the hive
time to make love 2 my 37 wives

being that this is TEXT i am looking to see if the numbers add up or something, so i suggest if you just need to say 'to' then put it in. also when you put 2 i think you mean two which makes no sence in some line

4/10
I know you can do better... hit the books

take that how you want


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