CoMpliCaT'd.. Stop Making It Dat Way!
 

Dis da Boy CoMpliCat'd aKa RhYo!!!!
I'm Not Gonna Talk To Ya.. But!


Ayo.. Yall Niggas In "Hot water" Like Tea Bags //
Because to get "My Guns To Stop Smoking".. They Gonna Need Rehab //
I Never Left.. But I Be Back!!! So Put Me In a Clique //
Or "Yall Gonna Turn To Sky Divers".. When Jumping Off My Dick //
This Is a Open Mic.. But CoMplicat'd Gonna Close It Up!!! //
Or Like Arabs On a Plane.. I'm Gonna "Just Blow It Up!!!" //
But... I'm Just Gonna Stick To Whats In My Head //
Most Yall Shouldn't Be Here.. "If it Don't Say DICKHEAD On The Thread" //
Bleed .. With one Cut Of The Sword! //
Yall Niggas Can Be Sitting Down.. "Still Couldn't Be Chairman Of The Board" //
See... CoMpliCat'd Most Respected! //
You Could have a Dictionary Of Crimes.. "Still Wouldn't Match To My Criminal Recorded" //
Niggas like.. *He SicK, He Must Be Infected //
I Got a Battle Wit Him.. I Rather Be a No-Show.. Like "I Got Dis-Connected!"* //


Holla!! Not Much Talk..... Didn't Even Try!
Niggas don't know!

you should have just said this as a battle
the whole time i was looking to see the other guy check in
the end of the line multies were pretty good but kinda simple

This Is a Open Mic.. But CoMplicat'd Gonna Close It Up!!! //
Or Like Arabs On a Plane.. I'm Gonna "Just Blow It Up!!!" //

the finisher could have been better cause i dont even get it.

6/10

take that how you want

I See What You Saying..
Thx.. It Don't Suppose to be
Like the best rap! nawmean just a keystyle for a first post
like a 5 min rap! nawmean.... i would keep doing it
but i'm tryingto get a battle record going...

anyway thx! thx for the critque too..

id offer to battle you but i dont like giving out wins..lol
i get you (nawmean) and if thats the case then you did good for something off the top of your head... feel free to raise your score by 1