The Preacher Speaks....pt.II of my saga
 

For eternities I can see degradation…. affiliated by much segregation
What is my interpretation? Ask a soul in which has lost its representation?
Knowledge is gained in vast quantities...and is lost to deaf ears solemnly
I am the light and in which can obtain the dark…but in which order must I play these parts
Fallen unto uncanny hearts…which beat in intervals far, far apart
Am I a vision of self-image…or just a soul who portrays grimace?
I question that of which has no true answer…but toward virtue I can find the truest of answers
Follow me in the world we know none of…so we may then embark on world’s beyond and above
Kindred spirits take heed and understand…I am a vision in which must execute this lifetimes grand plans
My hands, these hands in which shed blood…. received it all the same from bad and good
I wish to fly on wings of grace, my brethren…. to direct true love to all who are heroine
I close my eyes and see great fortune…. But will I ever open them again to see the sun or the moon?
Thou hast beckoned me to the gallows…to the very ends of the earth are very dark and shallow
My fellow man, will you not follow? Knowledge is before you, is not your soul only so hallowed?
Hear my call, unto all I call…. unite and we shall stand!, each other we smite and together we fall
One gift and one ultimate universe to share…. Into the abyss we fall to despair… if not all the many, I…….I will see you there

the vocab and flow in this was str8 sicc. Aptly titled as well because it took me waaaaay back to when i actually went to church and i felt like i was getting one of those real poignant sermons.

Fallen unto uncanny hearts…which beat in intervals far, far apart
Am I a vision of self-image…or just a soul who portrays grimace?

^unanswered questions/lack of faith/loss of faith

what else can i say deep emotional well written piece. 1

wow dope piece
I felt it... the use of vocab, flowing, wordplay, just some tight shit.
From the first line to the last you kept my interest and that's just what's it's all about. Just reading the first line, made me wonna read further.
I love how it's not a played out topic or something,... just something all of us go through at some moment in time.

eI wish to fly on wings of grace, my brethren…. to direct true love to all who are heroine'

^^^nice line

Keep dropping
Peace

I liked this. A kind of personal exploration through yourself of the world around you.

So you use personal emotions and thoughts (using a dark essence of poetry) to bring up social ills and what not.

You didn't go at this too methodically. Instead writing on the edge. Not too much. But nonetheless, on the edge. Which brought an even more 'real' texture to it...

..resp...

prophit...split eyes....yall get props...mos def...you really know your poetry...for all of yall are correct...i wrote this when i was drowsed of some tylenol flu...nah mean....but yes..this was a cultivation of my thoughts n brought together..for my illest side is my darkest...

varenao..you already know ma view for you brah...much love

igido

uppin fo a lil moe recognition...

you got the same views...thas coo brah...but from now on just post your OWN...im not jumpin on you brah...just lettin you know that its good ethic...preciate it though...

igido

Very impressive Preach....
You certainly have come along way since I was last
on here reading your work...and I'm loving this new style
that you seem to be using....I would like to read more tho..
so quit posting only one every couple of weeks ;)
This always seemed to hold you on the edge..then keep
you there...failing to draw you in too deep so you lose
all forms of suspence...which was really well done..I'm not
sure if u did that on purpose or not....
And your vocab was nicely thought out...you brought out
alot of emotion with your word choices alone...
nice piece

fa sho....but i get bored wit RB...n people are weak n shit..you know the whole blah blah blah...but yea....im thinkin of stayin a while....elevatin some cats...cuz RB has FALLEN WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYY down in illness of poetry...nah mean....thanks fo the feed back ma...


igido

Do ya want bad points or feedback? I could do the compliments too, and DeadlyAlliance has dropped on everything, freeposting at high speeds...

What ya say Preach, I don agree with the empty compliments, they show understandin but no ideals, and the good in a poem is when ya can see the bad....

i want whatever you can give me...whether you critique my work or feedback....thats the point...

any and all poets on here should give the good and the bad...thats what i do..i say what i dont like and do like....

even i need elevation....though just turnin 16 i dont know shit!....lol


igido