a god reinvented
 

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intro:

a god reinvented
is a god wit no laws

verse:

got futuralistic cricifix's that's thrown straight into ur cervix/
so God can amen a perplexity of prophits durin a service/
a religion that's above wishin, or prayin for a vision/
on peace in a mind lost on takin and not givin/
an order stuck upon tha luck of a man who's not alive/
struck down as a fool for he knew he would not survive/
left a wake of dead skin to please Mother Nature/
love ur mother, ain't no need to hate her/
stake ur...claim to a throne that u do not own/
before it gets took right out from under ur nose/
be blessed but do not test if u have success/
one quick blink, despise tha demise of being best/
u don't need to thank a man that lives in anotha place/
just remember that purgatory is a place wit no fate/

hook:

"there IS no way tha blind can lead tha blind" (quoted from Bizzy)
open ur eyes and ur mind to tha death of tha times
just do not try to find a man bent on death and crime
cause that man might be u ... now wat u gonna do?

verse:

if i thought for a second, it's a second i lose/
i gotta be quick to decide in which path i'll choose/
maybe i'll be a man who dies at tha tender age of 23/
or maybe i'll grow up and be tha greatest mc/
....{i just don't know}...
y can't i find tha shadow in tha darkness/
and yet become anotha known for bein heartless/
tha war cries r deafinin but they must be sung/
for once again, only sin has brung/
tha judgement, how will u be judged?/
if i'm judged as a thug so be it, i don't give a fuck/
just make sure my family lives their eternal life in bliss/
cause i know i won't, now ain't life a bitch?/

hook:

"there IS no way tha blind can lead tha blind" (quoted from Bizzy)
open ur eyes and ur mind to tha death of tha times
just do not try to find a man bent on death and crime
cause that man might be u ... now wat u gonna do?

outro:

so a man CAN become a god, hey?
ha ha
and i'm that man
life is sin within itself
it will neva stop
until tha heart of tha god himself
stops beatin

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aight, feedback please...

uppin....where ya'll at??? come on now

(if i thought for a second, it's a second i lose/
i gotta be quick to decide in which path i'll choose).
I thought this was a good start to the second verse, but then I lost ur flow. I caught what u were tryin to say, I just woulda worded somethings different.
Overall I would give u 6/10

a lot a people be tellin me that but tha thing is my shit can't be read so it's hard for me to try to make something ya'll think flows nicely, but thanx anywayz...

from the presence of a quote from a bizzy and a wierd (text) flow i think this is supposed to done fast.......not bad the topic was a little sketchy and i never got what you were trying to tell me but overall i liked it.

got futuralistic cricifix's that's thrown straight into ur cervix/
so God can amen a perplexity of prophits durin a service/

^this for example was a complex and dope line

but then you revert to this V

if i thought for a second, it's a second i lose/
i gotta be quick to decide in which path i'll choose/
maybe i'll be a man who dies at tha tender age of 23/
or maybe i'll grow up and be tha greatest mc/

not quite as good.........overall decent drop.....6.5/10

gawd damn prophit, u anme like twins and shit, lol, but anywayz, tha topic was a man that kills and reinvents god than becomes god himself, sorta like jedi's song where they say "we killed god to reinvent him", w/e though

your lerix r prity ill

*thumbs up*

great