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SmokaJoka. 08-28-03 01:35 PM

SmokaJoka666 vs. Split-eyez
 
10 lines max
due date is 1 hour after thread is made and both emcees check in...therefore it doesn't matter who spits first as long as they both make deadline
no recycling
no biting
no bias/crew/hate/dickryde votes

peace
4:20

Split-eyez 08-28-03 01:36 PM

aight checkin.....................................


I'll be droppin in an hour

gud luck

peace

SmokaJoka. 08-28-03 01:37 PM

checkin in................................................ .................................................. ..............

peace
4:20

Split-eyez 08-28-03 02:21 PM

aight I finished my piece already and I can't wait any longer to drop it cuz I'm about to eat.
anywayz, sorry for this



I'm spittin fast and furious, watch my wordplay - I send the survey
mez droppin hot tracks while you in stripclubs from mondays to thursdays
Fridayz to sundays, I'm ahead of you on the runway
I'm shooting you with every line I drop, cuz my words are like gunplay
So while I choke ya, ya wonder what the fuck could have provoked ya
still gotta learn that my battle's intention is to insult ya
You just a rich boy, stealin fans from otha groups and you take it for granted
cuz in the way I came up, nothing was handed
But I'ma just leave it here, my words are too hot and you don't want to get branded



gud luck and I'll read yours in an half an hour

SmokaJoka. 08-28-03 02:25 PM

i'll leave Split eyez in "CHALK LINES" like a 2nd Grade Teacher's "BOARD" on "CARPENTRY"//
my LAST NAME is the MARK OF THE BEAST, i'm IN ur MIND so u ain't OUT SMARTIN ME//
like "GREASY FOODS" i'll "CLOG UR VEINS" and "STOP UR FLOWS" when u try to "FART AND PEE"//
this kid GIVES MORE HEAD than CONJOINED TWINS, i guess he'll never be A PART OF ME//
i leave u GASPIN FOR AIR like a SHARKS QUEEF, ur "NEWBORN CATTLE" so i'll "START THE BEEF"//
like OCTAGONS ON PLEASE i'll STOP UR PLEAS, need BRAIN POWER cuz ur THOUGHTS ARE WEAK//
i BLAST CAPS and LOCK UR DEFEAT (Capslock), u LOVE EATIN CHICKEN with COCK IN UR TEETH//
like WEIGHTS ON UR LUNGS THAT U CAN'T LIFT, someone SPOT WIND FOR THIS GEEK (weightlift)//
like TRUDGING IN A DESERT WITH AN ESKIMO'S JACKET i can't believe u GOT IN THIS HEAT//
BLOWIN BUBBLE GUM ON MONOPOLY HOUSES is the only time this kid will POP THE INDUSTRY//

here u go...don't know how long it is....tryin a diff. style....

peace
4:20

SmokaJoka. 08-28-03 02:44 PM

uppin..oh yeah...MC Phoenix can't vote cuz i just talked shit to him....lol...

peace
4:20

IceBerg420 08-28-03 02:50 PM

Pretty str8 battle, but I tyhink Smoka Joka took this in every category except flow........Split eyes had a nice flow but ya rhymes were to elementary & your punches were'nt reall hittin on shit.................
Vote = SJ666

Yo check out my battle vs. M.Dizz iLL shits dope as fuck, but its gettin slept on

SmokaJoka. 08-28-03 02:54 PM

aight coo.....i'll check it................................................ .........

peace
4:20

Split-eyez 08-28-03 02:56 PM

aight, thanks for honest comments
still uppin.....

nice drop Smoka


UPPPIIIINNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN ...........................

An']['hropoLog¥ 08-28-03 03:00 PM

Ok this is no Challege

Smoka murked u kid wit punches and everythin else

Good shit Smoka, nice punches

But yo u mind hittin this up, thanks


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=76371

SmokaJoka. 08-28-03 03:05 PM

aight.....let's get some more votes in here.....my bad Split.....i was expectin Rappad to accept the callout....but keep elevatin aight......

peace
4:20

KRYPTIK~FLOWZ 08-28-03 03:09 PM

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=76274
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ hit dat up............^^^^^^

SmokaJoka. 08-28-03 03:14 PM

no................................................ .........................................

peace
4:20

EMCEE Cannibal 08-28-03 03:18 PM

Da Joker had da betta verse i tink, nice punches, they was consistant

goodshit

Pizzle********ZZZZZ$************

7curse 08-28-03 03:18 PM

aight werd ... this is tha break down...i liked both...honestly...but i kinda had ta go wit SJ666. i liked his shyt kinda funny an werdplays were there. but my advice is...never use "pee" as a werd ta rhyme wit...it makes u appear very childish...but u came back wit a hard punch...so just change that first line...but overall...

vote+SJ666

hit mine up please...people sleepin

7curse...vs...fundamentals


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