"SeaReef" new beat; feedback plz
 

My first (decent) beat:

Check it:
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/8/deeppulsemusic.htm

its short, but lengthening it would have meant just repeatin the main part and it took me long enuf to uplod this shit as it is.

production was ok. beats aight but that 4 decendin note melody gets used a lot. hell i think i got 4-5 like that on my page. keep writtin thou.....pz

pretty decent for a first beat.