the oppurtunity
 

when you get the oppurtunity its something you gotta take/
if you dont it will just be another mistake in your life tha passes by/
that problems you cause you cant rely/
if its your dream its something that you need to try/
dont give up or your worthless/
and youll get addicted to hopelessness and will start doubting your own thing/
you gotta show up with your game to bring/
if you dont might as well go home/
you act like your life is under a dome and cant escape/
you just got verbally raped into another form or shape/
you gotta keep up at what you wanna achieve/
you gotta believe in what you wanna receive/
its a lot better with nothing up your sleeve and your not movin like chris reeves/
go and retrieve and snatch that dream that you hold/
its better than being cold and being sold around until your too old/
you need to unfold and open up and say what you really feel/
open up to something real and steal what you hunger for/
your rhymes need to be hardcore and they will soar/
to the distance you never thought would go before/
so go and get the new highest score that you want to reach/
cause this shit i spit right here is the beginning of what im gonna teach/

someone critique this rhyme

that is some good shit. why the hell does everyone make fun of christafor lol that was a funny line as always i liked it and it gives advice to young aspirering rappers to

i liked that shit alot. i was feelin the message u were sendin through, cause bein a beginning rapper that shit was real inspirational.