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kal vs BarBreakeR
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5 bars ( 1 Bar = 2 Lines ) No H8/DR/Krew votes BarBreaker spits first No bitching bout rules No hating No recycling No biting Good Luck homies... --X-Plicit-- Damn i luv this gurls ass :) |
yeh i'm jus about to spit now jus checkin in.....
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R.I.P KAL
My Stamina Be Untouchable...Energy's On Different Levels.. Get "In-Ya-Mind" And "Exercise" With The Fire Of 20 Different "Devils"// You Couldn’t Even Beat Me..If You Payed Me To Let Ya.. And The Only Cherry You Gon Pop Is From A Can Of Dr.Pepper..// After You Spit Ya Verse 5 Votes For Me Will Suddenly Appear.. Ya Mumma Said Face Your Fears, Now You Lookin In My Eyes, Urs Aren't Just Sheddin A Tear// His Punches Like Faulty Guns, How They Blow Back And Accidentally Knock Him-Self-Out.. Tryin To Elevate Upstream Like Trout, Give Him A Iller New Flavor By Pissin In His Mouth// Right Now You Know You’ve Been Beaten...Lyrically Eatin.. And Cause I Merked Ya I Am Gon Smell A Pussy Everytime You Speakin..// LOOKS AT KAL IN THE EYE THEN PASSES THE MIC TO HIM |
‘RIP kal’ well I’m back resurrected from the dead, my lyrics are goin down now like when you give a man head, I’m act like a nechrophiliac now cos I’m fuckin wiv the dead/
This shits personal, like your ads in the mags when you write ‘man seeks man’, or ‘man seeks ass’, & before you come back with ‘he said ass he’s a fag’, this is an observation – YOU are the one who shit stabs/ How you gonna elevate when you lyin cryin in ya grave, by the way i shagged ya mamma & the bitch needs a shave, while i'm on the subject, don’t the stinkin ho ever bathe?/ You say you’re from ‘the land of dopeness’, but yo lyrics are from ‘the land of bland & weakness’, simplistic shit made up of weak rhyme pieces, tell me 'ballbreaker' was that ya verse or ya faeces/ 5th bar now Im’a make it count like Dracula, you arachnaphobic & I’m a tarantula, that was way too easy I gotta say thanks ta ya, prediction - I think your rhyme will be good (toilet paper)/ |
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aight vote goes to breaker, betta punches and wordplay
he had some weak lines though After You Spit Ya Verse 5 Votes For Me Will Suddenly Appear.. Ya Mumma Said Face Your Fears, Now You Lookin In My Eyes, Urs Aren't Just Sheddin A Tear// that made you look like an ass anywayz, betta punches, the other kat was good though, but was makin his lines too long trying to put more disses in probs to both keep elevating vote - breaker |
yo uppin for votes
DAMMMM! kal you streched your lines a lil bit too much...wack punches... uppin |
UPPIN FOR SOME VOTES..DONT SLEEP
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Flow-Bar Wordplay-even Structure-Bar Creativity-Bar Humor/comedy-neither Favorite line-Bar His Punches Like Faulty Guns, How They Blow Back And Accidentally Knock Him-Self-Out.. Tryin To Elevate Upstream Like Trout, Give Him A Iller New Flavor By Pissin In His Mouth// Vote=Bar |
2-0 to me ...yay upiin for more votes
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2-0 to me ...yay upiin for more votes
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2-0 to me ...yay upiin for more votes
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2-0 to me ...yay upiin for more votes
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bar breaker took it without a doubt better punches better everything........................................ .................................................. ...........
vote- breaker |
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