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2hot2handle 08-31-03 01:43 AM

take a look and check if its good
 
bangin these pussies like they have been closed/
clean these bitches up until they exposed/
infectin the shit that has interfered with the business/
cause dizziness so that they move people the other way/
show them the right path and influence them to believe what i say/
smash them as if thier clay made by the business play doh/
no such thing as sayin no to my body/
they messin this up like this is a little area like gettin horny with viagra/
they startin to get an overdose/
they need to learn a lot from these pros/
so they better fuckin listen to my text/
they have no clue whats comin next so i show them the mic/
show them whats right and you read mine its something you like/
you suffer from obsession that i give you depression/
this shit i say i thought i would mention yo lyrics gets suspension cause yo rhymes gets so many questions/
wonderin if they tight or wack as if they came from bow wow/
its too elementary and basic but mine sick like it gets to yo stomach/
causes acid that flows down yo esophagus and burns/
so listen to my fuckin advice and dont make this a fuckin crisis/
you screwin this shit so stop this/
now im goin to my bangin business/

WORD~PERFECT 08-31-03 01:52 AM

bangin these pussies like they have been closed/
clean these bitches up until they exposed/
THAT WASNT THE BEST INTRO......
infectin the shit that has interfered with the business/
cause dizziness so that they move people the other way/
show them the right path and influence them to believe what i say/
LACKED COMPLEXITY BUT WAS A GOOD IDEA NONE THE LESS
smash them as if thier clay made by the business play doh/
no such thing as sayin no to my body/
they messin this up like this is a little area like gettin horny with viagra/
NO STRUCTURE HERE
they have no clue whats comin next so i show them the mic/
show them whats right and you read mine its something you like/
you suffer from obsession that i give you depression/
this shit i say i thought i would mention yo lyrics gets suspension cause yo rhymes gets so many questions/
THIS WAS THE STRONGEST PART OF YOUR FLOW AND WELL DONE HAD HITTING AND WORDPLAY WAS TIGHT
wonderin if they tight or wack as if they came from bow wow/
its too elementary and basic but mine sick like it gets to yo stomach/
causes acid that flows down yo esophagus and burns/
so listen to my fuckin advice and dont make this a fuckin crisis/
you screwin this shit so stop this/
now im goin to my bangin business/
WAS HORRIBLY DONE PA.YO YOU GOT POTENTIAL YOU JUST NEED TO BUILD A LIL HARDER I THINK YOU CAN EASILT IMPROVE PAY ATTENTION TO WHAT YOU ARE SAYING AND SPICE IT UP.


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