24 karat \/ Amp
 

15 lines
no biting
no feeding
no dr
no hate
no crew
none of that bullshit
30 mins to drop afta check in

aight im going to wait to write until you check in, since its 30 minutes check thing but whatever i'll right now because.............check check like i was a hokey playa

checkin in...........
,................................................. .........
...............................

yo, 24 is gone now, so when he don't drop he aint on his computer we agreed that he would say something before he spit his verse or started writing

now im gunna spit my stuff

hold on, i have to eat i've got some of my verse done and its copied so i'll be back in a little bit .

I'm about to take this kid right here and push him for " all he's worth"//
Let you meet my verse and watch you leave our pretty green earth//
Like a "snake in the grass" i bet you didnt see me before i merked your ass//
Bring it to you fast and make pray at mass and you bout ta get smoked like a stash//
Strip away a couple Karats and lets see what your acting like then//
If i took away your confidence you'ld be bumping to a two outa ten//
"Shit for sale" at my Jewlers Dollar store, sales prices come to first bidder//
Your rhymes are a little one the weak side, they need a babysitter//
Like a blow to the neck, this verse will leave fuckin you speechless//
Everyone look at my compotition, I'm facing total complete weakness//
Your aging as an old man just turned 8-8 from sitting here being 8-7//
My rhymes Pearly White and you can see Pearly White while you sittin in Hevan//
Thirteen and you still trying to "talk with the grown folk" chill out thats fine//
You'll be sitting there sucking down my knuckles and i'll say "Now isnt the time//

thats 14 i dont want to do 15 because i usually just have it ryhme anyways im waiting for you karat

No hate

G4 Tv 4 Gamers

uppin
The text that you have entered is too short. Please lengten it to at least 100 characters long.
^blah

yo i juss got back.. i will spit in 10...juss claryifying that..
...............................

,....

Fucking with this fruity kid, now he’s in a route of hits...
His verse resembles an “evil clown”, cuz I’ll be shooting “It!!”... (movie/book)

He has me beat? No! Juice “ain’t worth seeing” like “free shows”...
First off, ya cheat hoe, He “bites” more than a “thirsty mosquito!!”...

Ima kill this crack baby – he must of “sung” to soon – so I killed the “fat lady”/
What now he doesn't want to battle? I thought he wanted me gone, must of been too lazy/

Unlike him, I win in a fair way! He can’t stay once my share sprays...
Cuz he couldn’t “step to my level” using a fucking “stairway!!”...

Yo punches aint hittin like paper between a fan....
All your “shots are off like you’re a “bad cameraman!!”...

Yeah he does have “new kicks”, that’s why they are “breaking in”... (think)
Faggot, “rape during sleep” is your idea of “rude awakening!!”...

One with the crowns the best, so fuck this brown nosed pest...
Cuz like “oral sex in a cemetary”, he’s “go down with death!!”...
ACBalla5190: Fucking with this fruity kid, now he’s in a route of hits...
His verse resembles an “evil clown”, cuz I’ll be shooting “It!!”... (movie/book)

He has me beat? No! Juice “ain’t worth seeing” like “free shows”...
First off, ya cheat hoe, He “bites” more than a “thirsty mosquito!!”...

Ima kill this crack baby – he must of “sung” to soon – so I killed the “fat lady”/
What now he doesn't want to battle? I thought he wanted me gone, must of been too lazy/

Unlike him, I win in a fair way! He can’t stay once my share sprays...
Cuz he couldn’t “step to my level” using a fucking “stairway!!”...

Yo punches aint hittin like paper between a fan....
All your “shots are off like you’re a “bad cameraman!!”...

Yeah he does have “new kicks”, that’s why they are “breaking in”... (think)
Faggot, “rape during sleep” is your idea of “rude awakening!!”...

One with the crowns the best, so fuck this brown nosed pest...
Cuz like “oral sex in a cemetary”, he’s “go down with death!!”...


whoa.....

oops its posted twice lol.... here is the real one ignore that ^^^^^

Fucking with this fruity kid, now he’s in a route of hits...
His verse resembles an “evil clown”, cuz I’ll be shooting “It!!”... (movie/book)

He has me beat? No! Juice “ain’t worth seeing” like “free shows”...
First off, ya cheat hoe, He “bites” more than a “thirsty mosquito!!”...

Ima kill this crack baby – he must of “sung” to soon – so I killed the “fat lady”/
What now he doesn't want to battle? I thought he wanted me gone, must of been too lazy/

Unlike him, I win in a fair way! He can’t stay once my share sprays...
Cuz he couldn’t “step to my level” using a fucking “stairway!!”...

Yo punches aint hittin like paper between a fan....
All your “shots are off like you’re a “bad cameraman!!”...

Yeah he does have “new kicks”, that’s why they are “breaking in”... (think)
Faggot, “rape during sleep” is your idea of “rude awakening!!”...

One with the crowns the best, so fuck this brown nosed pest...
Cuz like “oral sex in a cemetary”, he’s “go down with death!!”...

im confused you posted it fucking twice was it like already written and you C&P'd it?

whatever lets get votes

24 karat took this one better punches more experience n better styles n creativity...amp jus need a lil more creativity n flow keep practicin
vote- karat

24 karat had good wordplay and that made a huge difference, plus he had a nice flow, it was pretty one sided IMO...


vote-24 karat

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...8723#post748723

i need one more vote.. hit that up^

aight thanks for the votes
dot dot dot . . .

uppin
.....

fuck 100 characters blah

I think 24 karat had this, he had bette meta's and wordplay like this.....
Yeah he does have “new kicks”, that’s why they are “breaking in”... (think)
Faggot, “rape during sleep” is your idea of “rude awakening!!”...
Yo good shit man....

vote=karat, punches, wordplay, and flow...other dude had stretches bars and a harder read
hit this up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=77263