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Bash 09-01-03 01:50 AM

..I.E is Here... Ft. The I.E : Bash 'N' West
 
ThugzDoCry : Presenting....The new Team on the Block.......I.E....The Invincible Elements.......Bash 'N' West.........Yeah Yeah Yeah Yeah Yeah Yeah!!!!!!!!!

Bash: Let's drop a Gem on the Catz

[ Verse One - West ]
I live in a spaceship coz i spit like i'm from another planet,call me scotty coz i'm scottish and i don't have tha power to land it/
i'm guilty coz my lyrikal style leaves victims in denial,i defeat other emcees stackin them like junk mail,coz what they delivered was a mistrial/
dedication to box office ryhmes has got me tha desired effect,i'm like tha virtual form of Arnie,coz like terminator lyrikal bullets hit me and they deflect/
i'm available through multimedia coz i can be found all over tha net,also available through delivery coz my newly posted songs are uploaded at the speed of a jet/
misinterperatation of my vocals leaves your brain hearin voices,it says we ridin and i'm king of kings,thats your inner self comparin me to one of Royce's/

~ West gives the Mic too Bash ~

[ Verse Two - Bash ]
Demonic Soulz-Crack Plutonic Skullz With Persistant Holdz
That Never Give up Like Sadistic Strip-Showz
Historic Music Composed , Scientifical Calesthinics Unfold
Mystical Mind , States Are Remotely Exposed
Hack Neurogical Functions , Crack The Logical Pathways
4 Combined As 1 Malfunctions Like Dismantling Junctions
Check This Philosophic's Hunches
Linquistic Spits Dismiss in Bunches
A Sense Of Irony,Take Burners To Robert Bunsen
Uninfected Seem Condensed
Incense The Pretense Of Pissed , Ashes2Ashes Like The Dead Recieving Lint / ( West - damnnnn )
MC's Quickly Dismissed , A New Breed Of Text Now Exist
4 Founding Fathers Of Rap With Full Defense
Immense from Valleys.....I'm known as the Rap Bob Marley
We leaving the place stained, taken enough crap, a literal bloodbath/
Got Heads Strainin More Than Andromeda
Abominable Drama Our Brains Possess More Atoms Than Yokohama

Bash - I.E is here!!!!!!!!!.....................And we aint going nowhere

[ Verse Three - West ]
vocally i'm different you could say i have my own sound,i was once told i was lost property now i'm heard at high volume,you could say i'm like tha lost and found/
call me tha element mercury coz i flow like it in liquid form,at room temperature i morph into fragile so i have to handled with care and cooled down to reform/
deadly diseases compared to me on a death toll are merely in figures of minus,i am equivelant to aids,cancer and all the std's and i spread like tha common flu virus/
West a.k.a scarface coz i kill other emcee's verses like they was a little cackaroach,like montana i have a little friend,which is a signal you should not approach/
invention when it comes to wordplay is tha foundation of my career,at ground level i'm solid but overlooked for so many years like tha great william shakespeare/

[ Verse Four - Bash ]
Knock Possesed Unconscious With Commas
Leavin Heads More Steemed Than Malfunctioning Infernal Sauna's
Live A Life Of Dominace
Morbid Actions Knock Verbs To Parallel Dimensions With UnMentioned Prominance
I Cut more Heads than A Barber
Meant , No Joke As I Get More Votes Than Throwin Ballets At The Parliament
Plasmatic asthmatics, vamipiric tyrants feeding, blood drips lickin’ the lips
Flippin the mists of Avalon so traveled on by gods of Babylon
And battle on the fields of Valhalla as verbal mastadons
The Dynamic Disasters, long since awaited, vacaitin’ the ill-fated
Still stated as phases of highest elevations of ill status
Skills rateless, the nameless emcee sadists, fazeless to pain
Divine alias named, on unseen planes, faces unable to paint
Two poltergeists nicer than 13 ghosts combined, shuttin down the lights with the spiritual minds of Mankind
Emcees hearts are Pumping in Fear....Because The Invincible Elements is here......................Yeah....



The Invincible Elements / a.N.b

RythmicTendicies 09-01-03 06:31 AM

You Both had nice lines here,

BASH:
Your Vocab and the way you played it was sick, especially in these lines:
Demonic Soulz-Crack Plutonic Skullz With Persistant Holdz
That Never Give up Like Sadistic Strip-Showz
Historic Music Composed , Scientifical Calesthinics Unfold
Mystical Mind , States Are Remotely Exposed
- hott.

Your overall content was good, however you can use too much vocab sometimes, just try to hold back on it a bit :)

WEST:
I felt that your lines were too long, they could have been cut into 2 and it would've made your verse seem longer. However some of it was dope i.e.:
call me tha element mercury coz i flow like it in liquid form,at room temperature i morph into fragile so i have to handled with care and cooled down to reform/ - Tight wordplay here, and in the 'Terminator' line as well..nice :)

Overall:
8/10, good introduction to the 'Invincable Elements', hope to see more as time goes by!

west 09-01-03 10:42 AM

Ok uppin this shit.

Edicius 09-01-03 10:45 AM

Nice drop, my dawgs.....real nice from both of u...props!..peace

west 09-01-03 11:44 AM

Thanx Uppin Still.

pot1ent 09-01-03 12:01 PM

This was a nice collab

But i found the structure on both of the verses a bit off...but it seemed to flow really well...

Very tite for an intro...lookin out for topicals...

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west 09-01-03 12:08 PM

Thanx for tha feedback.

MythikuL 09-01-03 12:51 PM

^^^now we all kno..y they call themselves the invincible elements..LOL

great shit...i thaught this shit was a great collab..

if one had a flaw the other picked it up....

bash came with incredible vocab, style
while west came with a good flow, and topicz

great collab u 2....

west 09-01-03 02:00 PM

thanx for tha feedback so far,but still uppin.

west 09-01-03 03:11 PM

Bein slept on peeps,Uppin.

Provoked Images 09-01-03 03:34 PM

that shit was nice as a collab but to tell u tha truth tha contradicting styles sorta made me start ova on tha second third and fourth verses, otherwise it was good overall, it probably wouldn't of had that problem in audio, good piece...

west 09-01-03 07:53 PM

Yo thanx uppin!!

west 09-01-03 09:09 PM

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west 09-02-03 11:06 AM

Uppin this.

WORD~PERFECT 09-02-03 11:09 AM

i think this was proper both of you lacked in previous posts but this one seams like yyou both found what was missing and brought yourselves back to what is expected from you.very good on both of you tight rhymes.peep my 10thdegree and ordo abacho peace


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