At the End of My Rope
 

-At the End Of My Rope-
Sep 1st 03 0430-0450
-ELEETE- / SoL

yo
have you ever got to the point where you feel like,
theres nothing to live for? cause i feel like im at the
end of my rope...............


yo
sittin an writing the words
im losing my mind/
losing my head
im reaching for the end of my time/
the end of my rhymes
no more, ive reached the end of my line/
stopping for no one
runnin straight through all o' da signs/
man this is serious
i aint commitin no crimes/
cause when i leave this world
yo im leaving nothing behind/
im tired of getting no where
yo im tired o' trying/
you must be trippin
trippin if you thinkin im lying/
im tired of wasting away my nights
alone an jus cryin/
id rather be sittin in hell
burnin an fryin/
but this evil keeps my tears
from any hopes of them dryin/
i reach my hand out to you
but its too late.........im dyin.

frankly i like that shit nicely done and creative in detail hot

yo thanks for the feedback

This was an alright read. I thought it was going to be horrible because of the structure. But then I started to get into the flow. NIce work....