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ELEETE vs. tsheff112
Drop it Sheff!
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Ok...
I'm nice, I'm the type to just glide over a beat You're a fag, you're the type to ride a bike without a seat// How you gonna call me out But that's cool, you'll be my first// Victim but listen So I can drop you in my verse// So here you go ELEETE You're lookin sorta sweet in your drag dress// And you're not in New Edition So give it a rest with your fag vest// But you know like I do You askin for it and I'm bringing pain// So show some SOUL FOR REAL and sing the hook from Candy Rain |
aight then
listen up...... ima killa disease youll understand what i mean// touch me one time and ill devour your spleen// ill declare invasion mind and body seperation// take you over like a virus and cause contamination// ill stimulate your membrane causing you pain// invadin yo head so i can fuckin rupture your brain// like a demon witta purpose otherwise im worthless// ima mortician witta bag full o' corpses// these bags full o' corpses ima fillem wit horse heads// pay attention to the plot while it thickens and worsens// i know you scarred you pussy everyone knows that you wack// so fuck you and all yo kitty cat raps!// bitch |
So you're a disease then, right?
Or a gay butt demon at night// Or a virus that seeps Out of a penis in green and bright white// Regardless, dog, look, whatever you are You're retarted and my rhymes got you shook by far// I know you're going to talk shit Say I brought out the ghost in you// But what's a fag with a bag Full of horse heads going to do// Give it a rest, before I do it for you And you know what I mean// And get your mouth off of my dick That's not the way to get my spleen... Bitch... |
the only fag that i see is the one this page//
your wack flow aint enough to bring you to the battlin stage// cause it doesnt matter, its the point you been missin// cause my flows' a bitch slap when i spit you listen// i splice cells while im burnin hell// cock the gun back and start spittin the shells// you pissed me off, i never wanted to fight you// you gayer than that kid they used to make fun of in high school// you must think im trippin, for the shit that im spittin// im spittin this cause the shit that im sippin// its called alcohol so knock it off// cause you bout to get served a cocktail witta molotov// you can call me a liar but im startin this fire// shoot at both sides and see you stand in the crossfire// so dont test me if you never met me// your weak ass rhymes aint been used effectively// thats it............. |
The only fag's on this page?
You mean the one that you typed?// And you think you hittin hard But all you're spittin is hype// Your raps are like a JaRule CD Without all the singin// Think about it dog... It's only fuckin' silence you're bringin// Alcohol, huh? So drop the fuckin bottle and fight// I'll leave you starin at the celing In the hospital tonight// Your weak raps aint shit And quit with the science references Dexter,// You been playin too much Metroid And you just failed the semester...// And about that kid They made fun of in high school// Like eminem said... Come to think about it, it WAS YOU.// I think you're done now I've thoroughly addressed all of your issues// But hey, go check your mailbox Because I sent you some tissues! I know you'll be using them too BITCH! |
um yea......this is not how a battle works but wutever sounds cool ;)
follow the rulz.-insert +_o |
So how does it work then? What are the fuckin rules? I just joined today... So what's the format or whatever...?
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i guess this little fagget kid still wants to play
i guess sometimes, you have to learn the hard way// this hip hop, ima bring it down to the roots cut yo tongue off an serve it on a platter of fruits// you dont need to be rhymin, you wack pussy bitch go back to yo street corner and keep suckin some dick// so listen, no ones feelin all the shit you about i dont go to your job kickin dicks out yo mouth// i guess im demented, when im ejaculatin this semen left her creamin, fucked yo girl an left her screamin// you know you feelin my rhymes from yo mind to yo feet you blind, but you knowin the name is ELEETE// you met your defeat, so quit mentionin me you witnessed the rhyme that is meltin the beat// bitch!! |
i guess this little fagget kid still wants to play
i guess sometimes, you have to learn the hard way// this hip hop, ima bring it down to the roots cut yo tongue off an serve it on a platter of fruits// you dont need to be rhymin, you wack pussy bitch go back to yo street corner and keep suckin some dick// so listen, no ones feelin all the shit you about i dont go to your job kickin dicks out yo mouth// i guess im demented, when im ejaculatin this semen left her creamin, fucked yo girl an left her screamin// you know you feelin my rhymes from yo mind to yo feet you blind, but you knowin the name is ELEETE// you met your defeat, so quit mentionin me you witnessed the rhyme that is meltin the beat// bitch!! |
I SAY DRAW BOTH HAD A VERSE THEN A WEAK ONE SO ON SO FORTH YOU NEED TO ACCUMILATE ONE VERSE OF THIS AND THEN POST
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Uppin for votes.......................
First time................. Drop that feedback.................. |
tsheff112 had this his hits were harder simple as that....he spent less time biggin up how he was good and more lines with punches.....
good flows though I liked it..... |
On the real i felt that ELEETE had this all the way.........yo T you did a good job but ima have to disagree with XL......ELEETE's flow went smooth everytime, T i felt that you fell off the rhyme scheme and creativeness a couple times.......Yo T i like some of your punchlines but it seems like everytime you were tryin just a bit too hard.........no disrespect but ELEETE flow sounded like he had more of a vocab to attack wit........all in all it was good both yall....props! Holla if you wanna battle? peace
FAVORITE LINES TSHEFF112: The only fag's on this page? You mean the one that you typed?// And you think you hittin hard But all you're spittin is hype// ELEETE cause it doesnt matter its the point you been missin// cause my flows' a bitch slap when i spit you listen// |
One last thing my bad ELEETE for not being abe to vote i just got in on this shit last week.........but you definatley got my vote!!!! halla if you wanna battle!!!
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