trippin like thiers no tomorrow
 

i'm dangerous kinda like a serrated edge
all i do is get stoned and veg
dad raggin on my cause i won't trim the hedge
spit rhymes
commit crimes
snort coke
smoke dope
is whats goin on in this life of mine
gotta tell my mom i am fine
while tryin to money too buy a dime
I'm a wreck
when i comin in a room betta hit da deck
with a hand on my shotty
bout to hit anybody
willin to be a hero
drop dead he's a zero
trippin too hard
i got to far

this was bad...
yep...

what?...

^^ seems to speak the truth
more vocab
lengthen your lines
Get a better topic?

and last of all
elevate.-insert