lukeyb16 vs word~perfect
 

no d/r
5 votes
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post due 2o mins from checking in
best of luck
and no crew votes from either crew im in
this is no beaf battle just for kicks

where are you twin.............................................. .................................................. ..................................................

check in now i see your here!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

am I your first battle? then select your words wisely-
count your blessing…
your lukey (lucky) (you) b16 or id CURSE you with a parental advisory-

I’m WORD PERFECT like the windows program-with enough ram-cramned-
Into my head to bitch slap this man-with PUNCH~lines till he’s tattooed by my hand-
When will you understand-

This is one on one there is no room for a HALF ASS to spit-
you get ripped with that wack script you coming with-
once I unload it’ll take 2 OF YOU TO DROP SHIT-

no doubt!!!!! You called me out-
come equipped with an escape route- or kill me with your first rap-
cause once I open my MOUTH- your TRAPP~ed-
(“trap another word for mouth”)

I only spit heat the type of son(sun)~burn to change your melon complection-
Oh you better then WORD P? must have turn~ed and grilled my reflection-

Im that type,plus twice as nice-
and this was a freestyle damn I should of raised the price-
this kid couldn’t hang with this god if he was a crucified CHRIST-

my BODY of rap is as VITAL as any appendage-
of coarse LUKEY wanted to battle WP thinking he could up his (W)in (P)ercentage-

this a CLOSED BATTLE not a CLOSE BATTLE when I inflict terror-
exposte you like a MAXIM shoot with CHRISTINA AGUILLERRA-
they call me WORD PERFECT I expose each of your type~o~graphical ERRORS-
from dissing me to battling me actually-
I use the 6th sence… you already a casuality-

You couldn’t rock if you were TOPAZ-
In the present I amass the type of delivery to leave you looken silly in the past-
You confuse metaphors and similies with your sexuality cause all you (like)(is)(as)-
RAPBATTLES is my home don’t trespass-
(like is a word used in many metaphors) (as and is are common in similies)

your weak metaphors-is out~classed like freshmen’s and sophomores-
like ford vs accord-im just playing you this is how I strum the chords-
with words that merge-and submerege-
you must have had the urge-surge-
to get your cherry popped cause im on the VERGE-VIRG(IN)-

killing you is how i sruvive-you b16 which means you cant even ride or die-you fake gangsta you aint even old enough to drive.

before i forget no verse feeding neither........................................... .................................................. ....

im waitin for lukey to bust then ill give an honest vote >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>.................................................. .................................................. ................

your late on your verse are you posten twin you been viewing this already longer then 40 minutes........................................... .................................................. ...................

in a really quick time i could get a name/
but fuck u minors id rather wait for the fame/
and i dont give a shit if you mans think im wack/
your lucky its online or else you would get a slap/

i thank you word perfect for helping me out at first/
all these other mutherfuckas were scared to hear my verse/
and i respect you cus you were the first to attack/
cus ive got what these other rappers lack/

we should have done audio because text is wack/
theres a very big diffrence bewtween typing and rap/
these rappers are scared when it comes face 2 face/
the only way u can beat me is by cutting and paste/

thats the only way is to use my own shit against me/
dont get angry and temp me its only a friendly/
im going to stop this rhyme now cus ive done enough/
your long rhymes are weak and my short rhymes are tough/

aight then the votes begin............................................. .................................................. ................................................

damn this will be slept on.....i can tell .................................................. .................................................. .

UPPIN............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ....

WTF............................................... .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ........

PS. WORDPERFECT took this... begining was wack... you need to fix your bar structure... you got potential... i saw some creativity and potentially original punches.. your verse was ok.. but you could do with structure.. STRONG multis... mark my words... yada yada yada all the ingredients of a good verse... check the good verses as example... and study them to see what i mean... if you want references... i can help you with that

i'll take the help i need it................................................ .................................................. ...............................