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COM vs TREACH P
this battle got close in FL coz treach was going around asking people to vote in exchange for votes on their battles, so here it is in its full glory:
TREACH P's VERSE: ....:::: Opener ::::.... Didnt have too look hard to find personnels everything he writes is a diss to himself, Risk to his own health,His drops have no meaning,no depth, STOP HURTIN URSELF, I guess it was u who made the name of ya crew, what a moron, Does it feel good to belong to a crew that are to wack to have a their own forum? Dawg im'a eat u for lunch,The viewers complainin bout' ure verse cause they "didnt site a punch", Payin me out for because of my age, Ure a 23 year old netcee, lifes over turn the page, Ure punches got deflected cause they were so weak, With a name like".COM" u must be a cyber "geek", ....:::: Killin this bitch ::::.... Tryed to forge a punch, but u just got me confused with the -Hyphon, When all u ever wanted was just another homosexual for u to "hit on", COMS VERSE:: I Need A Suppressant… When I’m ‘Stoned’ I ‘Kill A Bird’-Or-Two Manic ‘Depressive’ But I’ll ‘Happily’ Murder-You This Battle Will Further-You; Watch The Style I Invented If My Flow Is So Soft Then Why Can’t You Dent-It? Your Pussy Is Scented I Can Smell It A Mile-Off Like Your Name Is Daffy Duck I’ll Knock Your Smile-Off Like A Roof With A Tile-Off Your Rhyme Has A Hole-In-It Round In Circles Like A Boat With A One Armed Man Rowing-It I’m Showing-It To The People; You’re A Kid You CAN-Be-Beaten (he’s 15) Your Rhyme Shows Its Age When A Grown Man-Is-Speaking |
This isnt good enough to be in elite but if u still want it its fine by me...fuckin herb...ohh yeah my verse went first so thats how i got some of my punches........................................... .................................................. .............
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its only in here for fair votes, seeing as you the D/R freeposting king// people have even been complaining bout you in I.R.
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Ive already posted my reply but the page wasnt
responding right...if you battle for real..in real life.. you know when some lines get the crowd going ooooh or laughing...the hypes not needed about your name what it stands for or online crews.... ~Treach P~ Didnt have too look hard to find personnels everything he writes is a diss to himself, Risk to his own health,His drops have no meaning,no depth, STOP HURTIN URSELF, ~good opener...id laugh seeing this in person~ Ure punches got deflected cause they were so weak ~youve went first didnt you..this makes no sense~ Tryed to forge a punch, but u just got me confused with the -Hyphon, When all u ever wanted was just another homosexual for u to "hit on", ~this could be reworded to actually be a punch but it desent rhyme at all..not even if you say hyphen differently it dosent rhyme with hit on~ ~Com~ I Need A Suppressant… When I’m ‘Stoned’ I ‘Kill A Bird’-Or-Two Manic ‘Depressive’ But I’ll ‘Happily’ Murder-You ~good opener as well as wordplay...hopefully its hype-free~ If My Flow Is So Soft Then Why Can’t You Dent-It? Your Pussy Is Scented I Can Smell It A Mile-Off ~an overused way of saying things but you worded it nicely~ your last line is something that would actually get you over in a real life battle with someone going first and you reacting... Vote - Com |
Re: COM vs TREACH P
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overall com easily won this. lots more dope lnes. punches- com personals- treach, not by much he only had 1... multies-com easily. flow- com. treachs line didnt all flow. multies and fklow are very similar also...multies help flow. |
com easily won this.....
punches-com personals-com flo-com vocab-com overall-com this battle was easy for com vote-COM |
Ima break it all da way down like da vet I am...
Opener: I liked Treach's Punches: COM by far Flow: COM by far Creativity: COM Personals: None frum COM...Treach Multi's: COM Meta's: COM Werdplay: COM Overall Complexity: COM Finisher/Closer: DEFINITLY COM! Entertaining: Both Didn't Like: All the lines about age... i'm 13... young yes; talented: of course! Overall: COM's was a lot more interesting than Treach P's verse. My Vote-> COM |
Mutlis=Com
Punches=Com Structure=Com Personals=Treach Wordplay=Com.... Com Has Evulated Alot since my battle with him and his strcutre is good treachp veres was...not good....i dint spot anything good... Please vote here...Failry its 3-0 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=77657 |
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*****breakdown******
Punches - Com Stretched Lines - treach p Meta's - Both Flow - Com Personals - treach (like'd them) Finisher - Com com basically won this by being better in most catagories......better overall verse..........props to both tho good battle..........com u have elevated alot since we battl'd, and if u wanna rematch holla at me vote= COM |
dam, nice shit from com. both came out kid. u guys were tied at some areas but com just took it period...good battle both.............................................. .......treach was strectched too...long ass lines
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yo i think COM got this shit also....he had better punches...better wordplay.....just overall a better verse....so my vote is going to go to COM....
poll vote- Com... ....yep ....pz |
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