Avalon vs. IceBerg420
 

15 lines max......
No Crew Votes
No Hate votes
No Production Votes (Bitches)
No biting
No recycling
No vote swayin (Punk ass Regime this mean U)
1hr 30 min to spit after checkin

Get ready........bitch...........

hello...
 

*Av picks up the mic...*


EVERYONE... GATHER AROUND..!


You'll be shook n weak prey... sprung off cancer and drugs,
see you'd be surprised how rapid ya blood cells... when put on ebay...
I realize ya mom didn't want you... watch Av put this in action,
hated me so much... she spent hours in labor... to put you back in...
I'm viscious ta fuck with... ya eyes mist & erupt quick
& when I see them tears runnin... I'ma put them bitches on crutches...
So return ta ya crib before this drama unfolds,
Or Av'll cut ya fuckin throat... dj style... like ya neck had volume control...
So what the fuck can ya do ta save you from tearin' and shredding?
Well ya can start off ya career with a blow job... like American Wedding...
The title’s mine... I merk... & I’m coppin’ it now
Cos ya’ body’s fully hidden in a trash can like Oscar the Grouch...
I'm raping you Ice, remodeling, your well known 'n fondled
Av'll reconstruct your manhood... 'n build pretty pink condos...
usin my name for fame... claimin to be on top,
this kid is fully comp- uter... he'll die in graphic nature - courtesy of Adobe photoshop...


*drops mic and walks away*


fuck checkin in and comin back...


Av...

*Note AV's Title heading Used to say "If it hurts....Av Did it" but as you can see...he changed it like a pussy.....


Av....Av.....Av....Tisk tisk man I expected better from one of RB's so called legends......But fuck it here we go.....

Avalon c'mon bitch....that shit u spit was pure garbage,
Comin at me wit half wits....U Might as well be retarded...
Dont get me Started...Avalon ya skills is gone & rap u might as well quit it...
Regime wonderin why they 'ass in pain'..."If it Hurts....Av Did it" (LoL)
Beat Me? Forget it....U gotta betta chance of hittin the lotto,
Matter Of fact U gotta betta chance Of Chrit's stupid ass not usin "What?" as his motto...(What?)
Follow me as I hit you wit tips thats hollow,
Take a loss 2 day and try ya Better Luck tomorrow...
Av never had any skills to begin with, Just ask Knightshade,
Retired from the Game like a lame becuz his pussy ass got played..
Came back like he mean, decided to join the Regime,
with 13th and Thug Wack... the fuckin "Herb allstar" team....
Avalon wanted 2 get it on.....Didnt know what he was in for,
Tryed to stop this ass whoppin at 10....But he begged me for more...
Regime tryna settle scores...But to bad it not finna happen...
And Please Believe every one goin down...As Long as I'm rappin...

vote now...


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ok

av

You'll be shook n weak prey... sprung off cancer and drugs,
see you'd be surprised how rapid ya blood cells... when put on ebay...

^^^uuhhh...wordplay was dope..took me a min but i get it now lol

I realize ya mom didn't want you... watch Av put this in action,
hated me so much... she spent hours in labor... to put you back in...

^^^lol sickness

I'm viscious ta fuck with... ya eyes mist & erupt quick
& when I see them tears runnin... I'ma put them bitches on crutches...
So return ta ya crib before this drama unfolds,
Or Av'll cut ya fuckin throat... dj style... like ya neck had volume control...

^^^lool sickness

So what the fuck can ya do ta save you from tearin' and shredding?
Well ya can start off ya career with a blow job... like American Wedding...
The title’s mine... I merk... & I’m coppin’ it now
Cos ya’ body’s fully hidden in a trash can like Oscar the Grouch...
I'm raping you Ice, remodeling, your well known 'n fondled
Av'll reconstruct your manhood... 'n build pretty pink condos...
usin my name for fame... claimin to be on top,
this kid is fully comp- uter... he'll die in graphic nature - courtesy of Adobe photoshop...

^^^fuck breakin it down lmao! sickness

iceberg

Avalon c'mon bitch....that shit u spit was pure garbage,
Comin at me wit half wits....U Might as well be retarded...

^^played punch that was so garbage

Dont get me Started...Avalon ya skills is gone & rap u might as well quit it...
Regime wonderin why they 'ass in pain'..."If it Hurts....Av Did it" (LoL)

^^eh ok

Beat Me? Forget it....U gotta betta chance of hittin the lotto,
Matter Of fact U gotta betta chance Of Chrit not usin "What?" as his motto...(What?)


^^^why would u qoute someone who doesnt like u and u shouldnt like either...that was pretty gay

Follow me as I hit you wit tips thats hollow,
Take a loss 2 day and try ya Better Luck tomorrow...
Av never had any skills to begin with, Just ask Knightshade,
Retired from the Game like a lame becuz his pussy ass got played..
Came back like he mean, decided to join the Regime,
with 13th and Thug Wack... the fuckin "Herb allstar" team....
Avalon wanted 2 get it on.....Didnt know what he was in for,
Tryed to stop this ass whoppin at 10....But he begged for more...
Regime tryna settle scores...But to bad it not finna happen...
And Please Believe every one goin down...As Long as I"m rappin...

^^^that was a gigantic filler...wit some decent trys at personals
basically not even close to enough to win this battle

vote=avalon

kinda reminds me of when i battled him and got my ass kick
:confused: iceberg beat me so im still wack :(

iight this was a pretty close battle so this is how ima set the layout

punches-avalon
flo-ice
complexity-avalon
vocab-avalon
wordplay-avalon
structure-ice
overall-avalon

i thought that this was a decent battle...iceberg came harder then usual but wat got av my vote were his hard hitting punches...and his creativity...his punches were hard hittin and had some humor

vote-avalon

M Dizz ILL now U know yo punk ass wasnt supposed to be votin...Its all good though chalk AV up for one hate vote......Dizz Know I merked his ass....So now he wanna see me fall...LoL fuckin prick.....

^^^i cant poll vote so all that counts it my 2 cents...
but...see if u get n e votes n e wayz...kid u 'beat' me
merk no where near gettin involved...look..at..that..record
:D

it goez like this...

punchez-Av
Structure-Icy
flow-Icy
multiez-Av
personalz-Icy
vocab-Av

so this was a madd close battle...at least in my opinion...it seemed pretty even...but I can't vote so that's all I can say about this...

hmm.... kinda hard battle ta judge....
personals were much betta from Ice and his actually made me laugh....
on da otha hand dope werdplay by Av.....
Ima havta give it ta IceBerg tho...
just more entertaining.....
winnin da lotto i still played tho
Vote-IceBerg

lmao... mmmmmmmmmmk... Once again... Spoken Legends votes against Regime... I had punches and dope word play... and played lines beat me..? Hum... well... let's vote here people...

Quit whinin Bitch and let the votes keep comin.....................
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avaloncame alot better......


if i hear


.....blah blah you must be retarded"

again ima fuckin shit......

ima give it to avalon for the punches and comin alot harder.....


bergs yours was tight just not as many puncehs that took my eye...










retunr the favor and peep my battle vs overdrive its gettin slept on like mad

bitchin..? no junior mint... stating the obvious...


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The ultra mega breakdown...

1st Bar...
You'll be shook n weak prey... sprung off cancer and drugs,
see you'd be surprised how rapid ya blood cells... when put on ebay...
VS
Avalon c'mon bitch....that shit u spit was pure garbage,
Comin at me wit half wits....U Might as well be retarded...

I really don't see the punch from Avalon.
Great wordplay, but where's the diss?
Ice's opener was played but at least it hit.
ICE

2nd Bar
I realize ya mom didn't want you... watch Av put this in action,
hated me so much... she spent hours in labor... to put you back in...
VS
Dont get me Started...Avalon ya skills is gone & rap u might as well quit it...
Regime wonderin why they 'ass in pain'..."If it Hurts....Av Did it" (LoL)

Tough choice...
Great diss from Avalon
Laughed out loud for Ice's.
TIE

3rd Bar
I'm viscious ta fuck with... ya eyes mist & erupt quick
& when I see them tears runnin... I'ma put them bitches on crutches...
VS
Beat Me? Forget it....U gotta betta chance of hittin the lotto,
Matter Of fact U gotta betta chance Of Chrit not usin "What?" as his motto...(What?)

Gotta give the wordplay and punch to Avalon here.
Just better. Flat out.
AVALON

4th Bar
So return ta ya crib before this drama unfolds,
Or Av'll cut ya fuckin throat... dj style... like ya neck had volume control...
VS
Follow me as I hit you wit tips thats hollow,
Take a loss 2 day and try ya Better Luck tomorrow...

Neither one is a diss.
One's a threat, the other's advice.
The threat sounds better.
AVALON

5th Bar
So what the fuck can ya do ta save you from tearin' and shredding?
Well ya can start off ya career with a blow job... like American Wedding...
VS
Av never had any skills to begin with, Just ask Knightshade,
Retired from the Game like a lame becuz his pussy ass got played..

I like it when things get personal.
Avalon's didn't quite grab me cuz, what career?
And if ya mean rapping, his record shows he ain't just starting.
Personal punch takes this.
ICE

6th Bar
The title’s mine... I merk... & I’m coppin’ it now
Cos ya’ body’s fully hidden in a trash can like Oscar the Grouch...
VS
Came back like he mean, decided to join the Regime,
with 13th and Thug Wack... the fuckin "Herb allstar" team....

Come on.
No contest.
Much harder and much more personal.
ICE

7th Bar
I'm raping you Ice, remodeling, your well known 'n fondled
Av'll reconstruct your manhood... 'n build pretty pink condos...
VS
Avalon wanted 2 get it on.....Didnt know what he was in for,
Tryed to stop this ass whoppin at 10....But he begged for more...

Nice ass wordplay from Avalon
Another nice personal from Ice.
Better construction and complexity on one side though.
AVALON

Last Bar
usin my name for fame... claimin to be on top,
this kid is fully comp- uter... he'll die in graphic nature - courtesy of Adobe photoshop...
VS
Regime tryna settle scores...But to bad it not finna happen...
And Please Believe every one goin down...As Long as I"m rappin...

Wordplay against personal here.
One was catchy and the other left em with something ta think about.
Clearly more impactful considering the outcome.
ICE

That should do it.
Very close, but Ice edges it out.
Great fuckin battle, guys.