The Syndicate vs Mc Haze
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no bitchin,feedin,d/r,haters 5 votes win(5-0)=ko 10 lines max freestyle no pre-written shit good luk son |
aight listen...this fool steps.....damn jus let me generate n merk this chump
aight,this is a battle between the king of all "lyricists",and the queen of all "dramatists"//1//this chumps singin "choruses",while i'm throwin frontline "fists"//2//but its in his fukin name,he mus' be high to think he can battle and "win"//3//coz now you've been smoked,back to your computer glued "origin"//4//you can't win this battle,becoz there isn't a place for "third"//5//so go back to your usual day job,an inbread computer "nerd"//6//i can't believe i spit ten lines,coz i woulda merked ya in the first few "bars"//7//now your diseased jus like toronto,i'm a lyrical killer like "sars"//8//but all ends that ends well, i hope you elavate to at least a "draw"//9//but i killed you before your chance,and severed your lines with my verbal "saw"//10// not ma best but hey................i dont give a fuk i was freestylin..........rite kid ya better spit in tha next ten R.I.P(ROT IN PIECES)BLLLLLLLLLAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH |
when im castratin,my hands are steady,
so bitch are u ready to have ur dick chopped of with a machete// 1 line when it comes to inflictin pain im creative, ur gonna need a sedative,gettin tortured by a fuckin native//2 lines now im gonna ram my fuckin glock, like a cock, up your asshole,open ur fuckin skull//3 lines a pink brain casserole,natural,theres no fuckin preservatives,when the bullet hits i make certain the fuckin blood squirten//4 lines you'll cringe - when you get pinched with my siringe, Then fall asleep and become chow for my flesh eating binge//5 lines twist ur fuckin flesh, creatin grotesque contortions, imma chainsaw wieldin maniac,i use it 2 perform abortions//6 lines u changed ur name cus ur embarrassed about ur record, fuck 10 lines,alli need is seven ur assured// 7 lines |
aight glad ya dropped kwik lets get some fukin votes on this shit............................upp upp uppin.........................................
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mc haze was quite a lot better
its just that sydicates rhyme aint going nowhere his rhymes are boring mc haze lost it half way now im gonna ram my fuckin glock, like a cock, up your asshole,open ur fuckin skull//3 lines whats that about |
uppi uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin for the seconnd time wattttttttaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.... .......................
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throwin it bak up for a 3rd time dont sleep peeps c'mon............................................. ...................................
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da syndicate had this easy....he had flow meta's and wordplay......good verse from him and an easy win........
yo syndicate can you do sigs? if ya can pm me iight!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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Hey, I wasn't really that into either ryhme, but it was close. I think syndicate took it, barely, because of the better wordplay. Haze, your shit was cool, but it was a little thin on body... Close call, but syndicate gets the W on this one. I'd poll vote, but I guess you just have to settle for feedback until I get 100 posts. I'm not saying that the shit's not good, it's just that I wasn't feeling it, but hey-- nobody feels everything... So keep the good shit up!
Hit up this shit with some thoughts... It's me battling my next door neighbor, that's why there's no rules: |
break down
flow it was even punchs i gave it to synd i thought he came way harder than haze wordplay i gave it to synd multis i gave it to synd i sein mo from him than haze vote synd and hit this shit up its gettin slept on holla http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=77628 |
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