This is ya boy...im new to this internet rappin shit but check this out
 

fuk all u fake gangstas talkin bout nines that spit/
ice u rock-stash u got an how u aint legit/
internet gangstas ready to drop wen it comes 2 keystyles/
but if u step on the streets u wont breathe now/
its all fake-masquerades of how u livin dangerous/
wen half of ur raps bitten -admit it- u a plagerist/
an fuk wanna b emcees if you got skills then drop/
insted of dickrydin real emcees you jus need to get off/
fuk writin manuscripts cause half of u dont get it/
but if you feel wat im sayin-son-ya neva forget it/
im about to show fools how to drop punchlines/
they gettin no chance like a soldya on frontlines/
wen u battle me you walk into certain death/
snatch the ground you walk on an u takin ya las breath/
make magic look like childsplay wen i slay em the right way/
confused they leave brusied seein stars wen its plain day/
fuk it-i aint even gonna attempt to start shit-
i burn like fire-an the mics wat i light wit...

wassup i need a crew?


A-Town

yeah shawty

it had flow and you stayed on topic it was alittle low in volcab and the topic's been done but for a first time i think this was really good keep working at it

NEED SOME FEEDBACK....AND A CREW TO RUN WIT

WHATS REALLY NICE?