brother of a fallen soldier
 

drop your head down with a frown starein' at the ground like it has answers to be found. look deep to the earth, the mother of birth the father of death closer at every breath. let your tears fall like spears through the cheers of those who fear and sneer your way. i lost my brother today smothered away by some politician and the game they play.play at war like pawns on a chessboard and whats even more its done in the name of the lord. the celestial being the man in the sky and when shit goes wrong we be askin him why. he speaks no truth he tells no lies he's just and excuse for pain in disguise. all in all i'll drop where i fall and wait for a reason to rise to the call

hard for me to feedback but if i had to...it was sorta basic, srry bout tha loss though, oh, n organize tha flow next time, i got lost at times (bad eyes)...

basic style for a complex topic is used morew then not for you i think it played very well and i offer condolences on your loss.