forgotten
 

singing hook:
hello...is there any~one who care's?
anyone who can see it isnt fair?
to be forgotten after all the pain i baired?
now it is all gone............
(scratches from aesop rock sample)
"i knew what i wanted and didit till it was done..."
"i been the dream i wanted to be since day one...."

verse one:
i feel like im one of the greatest to do this-
one of the most exclusive-with eveidence that is conclussive-
and when im gone i'll be missed-
after all the hits ive writ-and the m.c.'s ive ripped-
my hall of fame plaque will probably be skipped-
the king of one liners-
feeling like an old timer with old timers-
wondering how i major in rap but rhyme with the minors-
nigguz is delerio~us-with their nefario~us-
attempts to leave me exzempt from my microphone throne-
but i cant be cloned so their is no comparing us-
am i supposed to just retire unherd at my conclusion-
get few props for my pention after my contribution-
no wonder i joke the game this shit is amusen-
how after i provided amusement they just let me die-
the radio cuts my on~air supply-
and im forced to do duets with some fags like JAMAROQUI-
life isn't aboute drive bye's in 350 i's-
i been FUCKEN cats out of their peace of the AMERICAN PIE-
like that guy-but the question is why?-
im the only one who notices my progression-
how i mature in each song going through the transgression-
or notice i only battle to fight my tension and depression-
so what if i get paid a fee-if i wasnt me-
id still be writting for free-
when i said throw your hands-there were the fans-
but when i am no longer that man-will they diss me or understand-
rap isnt a life plan-eventually you can rise to the top but eventually have to land-
cats you call your fam- get imancipated when your no longer in demand-
it's redundunce-
we journey the globe but fall off the planet like the myths of COLOMBUS-
the mic is-a money grubbing whore in metaphor-leaven you ife less-after cracking my knuckles continuiosly resighting writting some of the tightest-
joints and all i have to show is lerengietest bronchiedus and authorietist?life , music and death is sopervious.


singing hook:
hello...is there any~one who care's?
anyone who can see it isnt fair?
to be forgotten after all the pain i baired?
now it is all gone............
(scratches from aesop rock sample)
"i knew what i wanted and didit till it was done..."
"i been the dream i wanted to be since day one...."

yo
this was a sweet piece
vocab was there
flow and wordplay was there too

the chorus seemed a little off flow, but it was singing so, it was aiight....
anyway overall i liked it, keep droppin

please check out my latest "I'll Never Quit"
peace!

UPPIN

Ay yo, I like this shit and I feel it. I got that feel of it about a quarter of the way into it. Good flow and concept. Keep that shit up.

Hit up my first ever drop in Open Mic: She's gone now...

Laaate.

UPPIN

uppin

yo son...I ain't seen you drop nuttin' but fire up in these open mics man...

dammit!
any more rule breaking and I'll request your ban, savvy?

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