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Back Stabbin Bitch!!!!
Yo u bitch u really fukked up this time
U werent a chick i'd smack cept now i'll just write this rhyme Lies were the only thing ur skanky ass ever told My stupid ass bit, everyword that u sold Fukk u, I hate u, oh i dont like him fukk that U wack bitch, week after we take a brake ur hittin for the wall Takin a crack at the fukker who u always said nothin was there Fukk u bitch ill kill without feeling any remourse of dispare U lied to me after 19 months u fukkin cunt I hope u rot in hell for this shit, in ur face i spit Don't ever approach put ur life to a quit Ur a slutty ass bitch just a cunt rag I wish this clip was full i shoot you with this mag U fukked up real good i hope u know wat uve begun I'll beat u to a bloody pulp till all ur life is gone I killed you and i dont feel one bit bad or sad Come to think of it bitch im almost feeling glad I can't wait till u take ur last breath and walk to the shadow of death Cuz u aint nothin but a two timin bitch All hate here, u nothin but a witch I hate you with every bit of my heart and soul I can't believe all the parts of my heart you stole You unbelievable, fukkin said u'd love me forever Its been 7 days now ur like watever I just needed some fukkin time to sort shit out But now i now ur a slut without a shadow of a doubt Ur new little friend if i see him again ill curb stomp his face I rip out his skull, leave him bloody in disgrace Hope u dont ever see me in a back alley soon cuz u'll be visitin ur dead relatives I hope ur neck is the first part of ur body that gives Cuz then ull be paralized waiting for a stompin Was that bitch really worth mackin and rompin Ur dead bitch ur dead listen to the words that are said Straight up bitch ur dead ill bust u in ur head and fill ur new b/f with LEAD PEACE This is to many skanky ass whore ex-gf. We took a break cuz i needed some time cuz i just started college. Now the bitch is mackin on a kid that has been tryin for over a year. She always told me nothin was goin on and today i see her at the mall flirtin like mad crazy with the fukker then tonight she's at a dudes house when i call her to confront her bout this shit. We dated for 19 months and in 7 days she is pulling this shit. I was ready to reconsider but fukk that bitch. Give me some INSIGHT PEACE OUT |
yeh man!
fuck her, i had basically the same problem but i got over it got me a new girl now so it's all good anyway, the rhyme was good, i could feel the anger that you put in it, peace! oh and check out my latest piece it's called "I"ll Never Quit" |
fuck her...and I mean that in as many wayz as possible...lol...nice rhyme but the multiez and vocab could use a lil' work...good flow though...keep elevatin'...
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they r right that was hot and u do got some skill i could also see the anger u put in it but yeah every guy goes through that actually i went through the exact same thing with my fioncee i though she cared but she was after the money u know how triflen ass hoe's b well shit i hope every thing works out
im out peace man 1 |
ya thanx for the reply i didnt want much vocab just wanted it short and sweet if u know wat i mean thanx for the feedback this poem made me feel way better anyways hit this battle with an honest vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...5646#post755646 |
that was good your vocab was prity good, i really liked ur concept
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Yeah man, fuck that shit, push her down some staris... That's about what I want to do to my ex-cock whore. Yo good piece and I can see that you just want to fucking smack the shit out of her. I feel that shit. Good and simple.... I like this drop.
Check out my latest drop in Open Mic called "She's gone now" and hit this shit up, it's gettin slept on like a fucking bunk bed: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=77723 |
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tight ass drop, came with great intencity, the vibe was ill great drop homie peace
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