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Otherwordz 09-04-03 04:12 AM

2:56am Cinamon Toast Crunch Wallaby'z (battle freestyle rhyme)
 
now class is in session... and I'ma teach a topical-lesson...
what you say is not-of-the-essence...
for me rhyming is just a hobby dog...not a profession...
a lot-of-contesants try to challenge-this analysis...
gettin' hit with multiple punchlinez could end up in paralysis...
I'm the catalyst in all the battlez-shit I get involved-in...
my rhymes are so concentrated
that even ya watered down linez won't act as solvents...

it's appallin' when I spit sick lyrics with a sharp tounge that could sever-ya-kneez...
I got you on lock so I'ma call you AJ cause you think you run the show you can never-be-Free...(106 and Park)

now this is just some shit that's comin' off-of-the-dome that you might-savor...
my rhymez got nice-flavor...
but you the type to be locked -in-ya-home reinacting Star Wars with a friend usin' ya cock as a light saber..

I type now but I'll write-later...with some nice-vaporz that I'm breathin'-in...
believin'-then you be like Toni Braxton cause after you fuck with me you'll never breathe-again...

it's deiceivin'-when you act gangsta until I own total controll-of-ya-set... that you chosen-to-rep...
now that you been sonned...call me father nigga...show-some-respect...

COM 09-04-03 05:16 AM

wow, REAALLY nice dawgy, you got the knack for this open mic shit...
now this is just some shit that's comin' off-of-the-dome that you might-savor...
my rhymez got nice-flavor...
but you the type to be locked -in-ya-home reinacting Star Wars with a friend usin' ya cock as a light saber..
LMAO-nice as fuck line
props dawgy

DiverseSyndicate 09-04-03 02:47 PM

tight drop,i liked it,good multis good wordplay,good structure,keep droppin.~1~

2hOt4tV 09-04-03 02:53 PM

DAMN THIS SHIT IS TIGHT, REAL REAL SHIT DOG, THATS GANGSTA

i like the 106&park shit

Otherwordz 09-04-03 04:11 PM

thanks y'all...still uppin...

Otherwordz 09-05-03 07:02 AM

Quote:
Originally posted by King of Thievez
thanks y'all...still uppin...

Otherwordz 09-05-03 03:52 PM

yuppin'...c'mon kidz...

Verbatim 09-05-03 04:54 PM

nice drop
nice flow and vocab
keep droppin

peace

rule 09-05-03 09:40 PM

that was sick...i get the feelin you wrote that at basically 3 in the mornin lol...but you still brought killer constructivity...punches an flow an creativity was dope...peace

StOrMiN lYrIcS 09-06-03 01:04 AM

u got nice flow, it was all good

HighDro 09-06-03 01:09 AM

that was straight up hot as hell. i was really feelin that shit the hook was hot too keep doin ya thang son....hot shit


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