My Lady
let me explain pain and the way a heart gets sprained
how deep i let you wander into the depths of my brain i beg for change screaming with raw energy and rage played once as a king now nothing more than a spade think back to the fitful nights of sleepless dreams i suppose love has a price to or so it seems i'm addicted to your touch like a crack fiend acting badly my souls wound needs bactine i knew this lady she was as fine as can be so i asked this lady could she ever love a man like me and when she spoke her words struck my soul turned to fire what once was cold how can i speak to it no way can i tell a lie for you i'm willing to sacrifice all right down to my life strife trouble and anticipatied tribulations stay close to you though out my constant litigations barely known reaped and sown shown loves loopholes despite the fights and names called you are there to hold brave and bold fiery cold like ice drops melted on top of my soul your treasure chest of harried bliss love blooms and unfolds i knew this lady she was as fine as can be so i asked this lady could she ever love a man like me and when she spoke her words struck my soul turned to fire what once was cold but believe it or not this evening i plot to take back every single thing that you've got love is pain and pain is death the rest i lay to rest to relieve this stress pressed on my chest your body once to me was a sacred temple now i weep as i place a farewell kiss on the edge of your nipple tragedy struck lost lust leads to temptation indignation at my discontented determination led to this current mishandling of the situation where we BOTH lose me and you BURN in fiery damnation so come on sweetheart satan fuckin waiting no time for tears we got a hot spot placed on reservation i knew this lady she was as fine as can be so i asked this lady could she ever love a man like me and when she spoke her words struck my soul turned to fire what once was cold |
the hook wasn't too bad and the verses worked they all could of been done with better volcab but i could see this getting spit it's pretty good
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nice piece, I liked it a lot. Can't understand why peeps are sleeping on this.
Nice use of vocab and nice wordplay. Luved how you put this edgy thing to it. Keep dropping, can't wait to read more 1 luv |
tight piece,a lil more vocab would do well other than that,its tight.~1~
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yeh this was good,
would be better with eter vocab peace check out my latest drop, it' called "I'll Never Quit" |
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brave and bold fiery cold like ice drops melted on top of my soul
your treasure chest of harried bliss love blooms and unfolds ^was aiight coulda been better coulda been worse work on ya vocab homie.............1 |
uppin
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u had some sick lines bro, nice concept
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