mc81 vs focus'd
 

house rules
u spit first
due asap... ill spit tonite
g'luck

check in........................................i will drop real soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

yo,
U just an illusion like a magic trick/
reality bites when u fell da heat from my smith or the tips from da fith/
u get what i wish and i dish what u get/
i hit cuz u flinched bitch/
u dead slumped ova a fence wit holes in ya fit from what i dispense/
I aint stingy.....i got a 9 so ima give you 5.....fuck it ima give you 9/
so messy they couldnt do ya calk outline/
Close casskett nigga.....dont grab it nigga(mic)/
cuz da 4 banga will leave you hoppin like a rabbit nigga
U faggit u lack it nigga!

so sorry man... i fell asleep and slept all the way through the mornin and am late for school now, so ill drop when i get back, its only a half day...


my apologies man... thats unlike me...

lmao^^^


this i some finny shit, i thought it was morning, omg thats great.


lol ill start keyin now...

quick keystyle for ya...


Focus Kid, Who Told You That You Could Beat Me With 'Punchlines' So 'Weak'
You Get Smashed To The Concrete, So Now You Can Feel The 'Thump' To My 'Beat'
My Callout Got You Shook, When It Comes To 'Beef' You Don't Wanna Do Nuttin But 'Cook'
The 'W' Is 'Stuck In the Books,' Plus It's Like 'Chess' The Way I Calmly Take Out 'Rooks'
When I Spit Bars Get Destroyed Like The Hulk Trapped In Prison, Leave You Retreatin and Bleedin
Nobody Feelin This Kid Can't Elevate, Like 'Fans' This Kid Has Already 'Reached His Ceiling'
I'll Have You Runnin For 'Cover' Like 'Linus' When He Loses His 'Blanket', Bleedin Will Be Eternal
I Read Your Poor Verse That You Dispersed, Because Like 'Empty Journals' It Lacks 'Personals'
Punches Lackin You 'Boxers Retired' Like ,Me Beat Couldn't Still You And Backwards Verse My Write Could I
I Deliver Hits N Punches, Face It I Run Spits, I'll 'Eat This Kid On The Go' Like 'Oscar Meyer Lunchables'

uppin 4 a vote....

hit this up and leave a link and ill hit it up honestly...

plz hit this up if u can poll vote...

i think mc81 took this shit with better punches , word play and an overall better verse and i really think it was close but mc81 gave what he had to to take this 1

poll vote = mc81

u guys stay up .......nice battle ..........check out my battles in front lines with an honest vote

im out
1

man can u poll vote? i hate when ppl forget to poll vote, even tho i do it sometimes... can u plz poll your vote?

UPPIN 4 VOTES! POST A LINK AND I WILL HIT YA BATTLE UP WITH AN HONEST VOTE.............................................. .....

yo 81 you didn't poll on my shit.

drop your poll vote & i'll be back to drop an honest vote w/explanation

there i did now............................................... .................................................. ..............

mc81 took this
"The 'W' Is 'Stuck In the Books,' Plus It's Like 'Chess' The Way I Calmly Take Out 'Rooks'"

that line was tight, there were some other good punches too, pretty much a one-sided battle though, mc81 had better flow, punches, metas, ect.

WORD
and this:

"Close casskett nigga.....dont grab it nigga(mic)/
cuz da 4 banga will leave you hoppin like a rabbit nigga
U faggit u lack it nigga!"

c'mon..... that is like no effort at all

yo focus'd you rhymin basic, elevate, those punches were love taps at best, but no beef, just elevate, you got potential


vote = mc81

ok
Punches-mc
Flow-mc
Wordplay-mc
Structure-mc
Personals-tie
Multi's-mc
Metas-mc
Vocab-tie
Mc81 won this easy just ripped it with punches and flow.
Vote=mc

ill vote once i get my posts up................................................ .................................................. ...........