Illunatic vs Uben. Sonned
 

yep ill spit first checkin
ill drop in a few man
10 Lines
NO Crew, Hate, D/R
No Feeding, Recycling, Biteing
No Freeposting, Quote Voting,:D

WHAT THE FUCK IS UP WITH THESE NIGGAS............................................ .................................................. ............

now ive done told all these herbs im inimitable*/1
but they neva listened and like them your gonna meet the inevitable/2
your ryhmes aint nothin big even as majuscule**/3
so they obviouslly even smaller than a molicule/4
youve lost the tell after that battle wit "sin"/5
but here lemmi give you sumthan else that wont be the welcoming win/7
my ryhmes were read by a judge and were labled sin-taxed***/8
your ryhmes were soft like they were made of tin-wax/9
but ill drop in full dont wrry bout half, cuz like da mussle diease im gonna half ya calf/10


FYI's
*inimitable-not cpable of being imitated
**majuscule-a large letter such a capital
***sin-tax- a tax on things that are harmful or sinful

g'luck man

wat the fuck is this kid freeposting in my thead for man fuckin dumbass git outa here

now jus waitin on u man

I'm Spittin Soon
Juss Got Back From A Football Game
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Kilt The Bitches 42-0

My Rhymes Are Lyrically Perfectionly Designed
Ya Punches Are Completely Effectionly Behind
I'll Lyrically Spit You Away You'll Defanitly Feel My Wrath
Ya Gettin Merked Away With Out Chance Of Aftamath
Battlin This Wannabe Vet Is Makin Me Upset
Startin Ta Regret Merkin This Herb On The Net
I'm A Newbe? You Got Me Confused
When I Answered Ya Call Out Ya Shoulda Refused
This Gone Be My Second Win From Spittin Lyrical Sin
My Punches Bustin Ya Chin Makin That Ugly Ass Head Spit!

^^^not a bad...battle...ight breakin it down

flow...ILL
punches..ill
vocab...both
enjoyablity....ILL
originality...ILL


UBEN...u never rlly came hard...and twordz the end u where just rhymin 2 rhyme...no good flow..weak punches...and no origanality...not the greatest lookin verse..

ILL...didnt come extremely hard...but was up there..and was consistant..hit with some original punches...great flow..easy 2 read....very enjoyable...good lookin verse

VOTE=ILLunatic

my vote goes to ill..........he had a better flow and better verse........no hate good battle...........................1

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Battlin This Wannabe Vet Is Makin Me Upset
Startin Ta Regret Merkin This Herb On The Net
I'm A Newbe? You Got Me Confused
When I Answered Ya Call Out Ya Shoulda Refused

^^^^^^^ that was my favorite of the whole battle

flow...ILL
punches..both
vocab...both
enjoyablity....ILL
originality...ILL

poll vote = ill ...................this was a good battle it is just that the newb (ill)cam harder

ya'll stay up and good lick to both of u in the future

im out
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Uppin
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Ill got this

Punches - ILL
Flow - ILL
Style - ILL
Creativity - ILL
Multis - ILL
Structure - Both

Vote ILL

nice battle but ILL got this, uben just come harder next time and you will prolly win...you have the style and everything else just need to come harder

UPPIN
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i liek illunatics shit better.. but i see that hwo it is on this board now..you dotn get your battles voted on unless your a vet..or if your battling a vet

illunatic took this...with better punches and wordplay.....

no explanation really needed....so my vote goes 2....illunatic...

poll vote- illunatic....

....yep
....pz