A few Beats
 

Heres a few of the beats i made. There not great but there decent im still new to making them so tell me what yous think.

http://www.soundclick.com/phatbeats

hip to the hop - too basic. that bass ain't dope enough to carry the track. i'd also suggest addin sum exta hits to the high hat line. ie go into the paino roll n add more steps, maybe even use the cuttin tool to slice sum of em in half to get rapid hits. then add a high synth line. then.....

dumass - better. melody was aight, but the track never got goin....add a snare n sum extra kicks at sum point maybe, n don't drop the melody of unless the drums is extremly tight. jus my opinion

The New Shit - it was ok. flowed a bit better. but don't use that kick again, ever...unless as a secondary kick or sumthin.

fyi: don't know if wrote that melody yourself .... if it's a sample, u can apply the same volume effect on shit but slightly adjusting the cut & reverb of each note by clickin on the notes in the piano roll.