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2hot2handle 09-05-03 12:31 AM

all the places i go rap
 
slow beat

here i go, anywhere, everywhere across this fuckin place/
here i go, here and there, runnin this shit just like grace/

faster beat

yo im gonna show all you fuckin cats this place/
my rhymes so good they flow across it like a race/
across the globe on any continent/
showin these bitches my fuckin content/
my beats are so descent that you cant copy my print/
its too hard to comprehend cause you fuckin bastards cant keep up with my own speed/
this shit i spit proceeds to the point that i succeed/
squeezin out each breath out of yo chest/
leavin you messed takin all the rest of yo shit/
hurtin you until i take the money i get/
yo blood pressure is gettin high, makin you fly by across everywhere and i swear, now that im goin to circle the map/
erasin all of yo crap/

slow beat

here i go, anywhere, everywhere in this fuckin place/
here i go, here and there, runnin this shit just like grace/ X2

faster beat

now im gonna take you to another area/
you bitch im takin you all around you see/
creatin my shit and shuttin it down on you killin you like a tragedy/
your gettin lost now cause your high on ecstacy/
hesitately you shake and all nervous/
i told you im gonna shut you down you earned this/
bitch im gettin sick of you in this game/
stop creatin anger and dont be a fake playa or pimp/
tryin to be some gangsta to be a wimp is what you evolving/
stoppin all your shit that im solving/
clearing away what you had makin you sad and you get rampageous/
im bombin the stages with the places i have been/
circling around the globe leavin you lost is a 10 outta 10/
you lost like a rat in mazesgoin through ohazes like you a test subject/
you a gay sex object that gets reject from the shit you have been is cukin your whole place up like an explosion/
bye bye for now im leavin you in a paralyzed motion/


slow beat

here i go, anywhere, everywhere across this fuckin place/
here i go, here and there runnin this shit just like grace/ X2

fading away

Mr.Christensen 09-05-03 12:38 AM

dawg... i like what you try but you are in serious need of a break
try this... write your open mic but dont post it... the next day take a look at it (make sure you dont think about it all day) then you might see how much better you can make it... i know you can do better than this... no lie

this was good but it lacked flow and vocabs..

5/10... i know you can do better

2hOt4tV 09-05-03 01:17 AM

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ima do that too lol..........[same as him]


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