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all the places i go rap
slow beat
here i go, anywhere, everywhere across this fuckin place/ here i go, here and there, runnin this shit just like grace/ faster beat yo im gonna show all you fuckin cats this place/ my rhymes so good they flow across it like a race/ across the globe on any continent/ showin these bitches my fuckin content/ my beats are so descent that you cant copy my print/ its too hard to comprehend cause you fuckin bastards cant keep up with my own speed/ this shit i spit proceeds to the point that i succeed/ squeezin out each breath out of yo chest/ leavin you messed takin all the rest of yo shit/ hurtin you until i take the money i get/ yo blood pressure is gettin high, makin you fly by across everywhere and i swear, now that im goin to circle the map/ erasin all of yo crap/ slow beat here i go, anywhere, everywhere in this fuckin place/ here i go, here and there, runnin this shit just like grace/ X2 faster beat now im gonna take you to another area/ you bitch im takin you all around you see/ creatin my shit and shuttin it down on you killin you like a tragedy/ your gettin lost now cause your high on ecstacy/ hesitately you shake and all nervous/ i told you im gonna shut you down you earned this/ bitch im gettin sick of you in this game/ stop creatin anger and dont be a fake playa or pimp/ tryin to be some gangsta to be a wimp is what you evolving/ stoppin all your shit that im solving/ clearing away what you had makin you sad and you get rampageous/ im bombin the stages with the places i have been/ circling around the globe leavin you lost is a 10 outta 10/ you lost like a rat in mazesgoin through ohazes like you a test subject/ you a gay sex object that gets reject from the shit you have been is cukin your whole place up like an explosion/ bye bye for now im leavin you in a paralyzed motion/ slow beat here i go, anywhere, everywhere across this fuckin place/ here i go, here and there runnin this shit just like grace/ X2 fading away |
dawg... i like what you try but you are in serious need of a break
try this... write your open mic but dont post it... the next day take a look at it (make sure you dont think about it all day) then you might see how much better you can make it... i know you can do better than this... no lie this was good but it lacked flow and vocabs.. 5/10... i know you can do better |
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ima do that too lol..........[same as him]
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