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KeMy$t 09-05-03 01:15 AM

Sometimes
 
Sometimes ur up
Sometimes ur down
Sometimes u smile
Sometimes u frown
Sometimes u laugh
Sometimes u cry
Sometimes u live
Sometimes u die
Sometimes ur blind
Sometimes u see
Sometimes ur trapped
Sometimes ur free
Sometimes u fight
Sometimes u dont
Sometimes u run
Sometimes u wont
Sometimes u win
Sometimes u lose
Sometimes u scar
And sometimes u bruise

Hit this up w/ a response thanx

Yo hit this up w/ a honest vote if u could too. Its gettin slept on and we need some votes. PEACE. C.O.T.C.

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Verbatim 09-05-03 01:19 AM

um....i think this was an alright poetic type thing...
throw this in the poetry section and u will probly get more feed back
but it was aight

2hOt4tV 09-05-03 01:19 AM

YO, its bad cuz u juss Said SOMETIMES in EVERYLINE and they to short and it dont make sence ~1~


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