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Lil Gotti vs. Insert
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13 lines no d/r votes no bs votes no hate vote due today /tonight -insert |
checkin in..I got my verse ready now,when you agreed to the battle I started writing,so I hope that doesn't count as a pre write...here we go..
Lil Gotti,the hottest thing around since the sun/ The 2nd hottest,is of course my gun/ And just for fun,I battle wack niggas like this/ My punches make blood come from your holes,just like a bitch/ Now watch as I rip this shit,in front of witnesses/ Since you think the world of rap,I'm gonna knock you off your axis kid/ You only see winners is when you save my verse,and put it on your fav-or-ites/ Damn,look what I did,he acceptin the battle,but he been merked/ Fags like him write these words on his ass,'PLEASE INSERT/ Listen jerk,you out of your league like Pepsi vs. Viagra in sex/ Dispersin' lyrical curses and puttin a hex on this nigga's text/ Homos like you cut off dicks but still cant get ahead/ Treat you like electric pencils sharpners,full of lead/ |
it takes you 20+ minutes to spit 13 lines..lol.and what are you doin?..dont even go thru the trouble of pttin effort in your verse..I didnt put effort in mine...besides..this is your first battle on rb and mine too..so it's nothin for you to worry about...
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Sigh* 7 min free style um yea sure um yea.......
"The Topic of the Situation" is your wackness cuz its killin me And this "situation" is one sided, Like a narrow minded "whitie"// Even if you waz black that dont make u ill, with u it dont make sense Youll step to a battle but then get shot like a "White Piketed Fence"// Tru colors come out when you step to real niggaz like "insert" Blurtin out anything, asertin ya self 2 but you cant do a fly by if ya name was "Sick Bird"// This "Goatie" is just another spine less bitch speakin to me cept im deaf See, I cant hear Unless u spittin an ill verse but since u UnImpress RB when u take a guess// This cat aint a fag no hes "straight" as a "Crooked Nail" cuz even if i had a "Hammer" i couldnt get u "Male"// Even if you set up a msn name as "insect" you couldnt "Fly" like a "buterfly" OR sting like a"bee" Chill, dances and Mcin , being a bitch...This girl sure peddles clips in "Sin City"//(i didnt know ohio was so gangsta lol.....idiot) Reppin Best Buy, This femcee tryin to act young but reality is This "man~ages" Ill get you runnin from ya office job like my rhymes jumped up off these pages Be real bitch and get outa here Check Profile to get mostly wut im sayin~~ -insert |
Sorry for takin so long n shit.........................
mY family kept on stealin my computer from me n shit then my girl came over and she stole it from me again -insert Reality or Actin? |
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uppin this battle...good verse man...I got a secret to tell you so check yo pm box...
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He def. put more effort into his lyrics than the other, i really can't say much except for that both have alot of elevatin to do KeyStyle Vs. AB/CD ^^^^^^^poll-vote in this battle Poll vote removed as this was unexplained - PlaGuE |
Damn..I should have said explained votes that vote was so supicous..anyway...uppin for votes...uppin for votes...
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you damn newbie..stay back before you get merked for real..and lets start gettin some real votes in this battle
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Vote Insert
WhY?? Betta overall verse punches and wordplay wus hittin I cant poll vote yet not 100 posts Check my Battle http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...2094#post762094 |
Alright....
LiL Gotti- I Dunno if you was just writin shit just for fun and u thought u would merk him or whatever, but yeah, ur verse was kinda weak. I can tell from you wordplay that you could spit hotter shit than this. So Basically your lack of 'effort' lol well it left you with no votes.....Sorry man..But you're verse was alright....Overall Grade On Verse-7/10 Insert- Your Verse was good. Wordplay was there, Punches good, although i dont think some of your lines made sense. You took this battle with better punches, but gotti took you with better wordplay in my vision. Well, right there when i said that it looks like a tie, but you def had flow, but you took this with better creativity. So yeah....if you even understand what i just wrote...lol...Overall Grade On Verse-8/10 Props to both....GOod battle.... OnE |
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