read this fuckin rhyme
 

i create and i demonstrate the shit that has been told to so many fuckers/
this bitch cant do anything, even writin his verse/
no matter how many times he rehearse ill still be disabling his orders/
showin this bitch what im made/
told him you rhymin like that, a man will get you laid/
get away you gay ass whore/
this bitch right here will get it when i make him poor/
tryin to be hardcore for fame that he dont deserve/
he dont have the nerve to stand up to this emcee/
this motherfucker i put in denial when I file his trial/
he dont like my style so i knock him miles longer than the nile/
hes guilty of fake rhymes that are so wack that this forum wouldnt allow it/
got him banned it left him with nothin but shit/
man he needs to dial 911 for an emergency for the police/
cause i been to busy fuckin his niece that cum i released/
told him that if you dont stay away from my fuckin rhymes/
ill bang off this bitches head as if it was written in the la times/
i didnt know that bitches were into rap battling/
told him to get of this site cause all he does is sing/
man we dont need wannabes we need true qualities/
told this bitch if you need help with rappin you better be readin these/

thats whack

shut up fruit, lets see what you got ya fuckin herb fuck

it's was an aight peice
flow and vocab was alright
keep elevating dawg
nice drop

peace

it was iight

homie imma be straight up forreal wit you......i dont think it was hot at all on some part it didnt even rhyme and the whole thing didnt make since
EX."showin this bitch what im made/
told him you rhymin like that, a man will get you laid/"

i woulda fixed it up by puttin
EX. showin this bitch what im made of/
I told him "if you rhyme like that, the only thing u gonna get is gay love"/

you feel me i aint tryin ta say u suck but i think u need to work a lot more wit that naa mean ~1~