I Got A Story To Tell
 

the name I got a story to tell is from Canibus CD C true holiwood stories but i didnt steal nuthin i jus thought the name went wit the song

I Got a story ta tell , i got a story ta tell, i got a story ta tell, i got a story ta teeeeeeeeeeellllllll hahaaaa

yo yo yo
you could stop the beat but the tune still plays in my head/
thas why im so ill wether im old wit no tungue , beatin or dead/
im always -keepin the lead- from a pencil n not from a gun/
i write 100 bars n get writers block when im done/
i got fun,my word are like Electrons rubbin togeather n cause lightning thats as hot as the sun/
and none of ya'll fake MCs can get half as hot as my tongue/
its so hot that u run,cuz you could neva understand my science theme/
go to a University n bring back 5 science teams/
and give me test with out rest like Phenominon with out respect of my esteem/
i'll always keep the headphones on so it could play if i die in my dreams/
I could rap on any beat even if its the Old Jews/
imma -rap fanatic- ill -act my tactic- after i -practice- rhymes wit -mathmatics- and -metaphore magic- ta proove i told you/
its tight the way my brain can explain the way you wanna be like me dont you/
i can rhyme to beats that cave men did wit sticks in the archapeligo/
i use to spit wit Noah before he made his ark, so called the yellow boat/
i rapped wit God for 7 days before he made earth/
i rapped wit him 24/7 untill he decided to make me watch Adam n Eve on Terf/
i used to rap wit Adam untill i was accused of letin the reptilian beast in an makin eve give birth/
i was cursed to live an infinit -life span- stuck on this trife land/
i was known as the Beast from The East an they neva considered me a nice man/
they destroyed my human body,n i was recreated by scientists as a super human bionic computer with a control panail attached to my right hand/
this guy by the name of Lusifer Bodeaga tha 3rd asked if he can be my right man /
he was a little bit short black hair n light tan/
he said he new some Talibon named Muhammehed Yalib Bailon/
and that he can do anything an work for us till dawn/
i walked all day long to his shed n asked him if he liked this song/
carved in slate he said no i walked off/
he said it was to violent i looked at Lusifer an said "hes to soft"/
Lusifer died 200 years in the past/
i was called a monster so i would hide my face with a mask/
i was sittin alone n this kid stopped n asked/
if i was the monster underneath that mask/
2 days later the kid became fataly ill n they said it was my fault/
so for centries i was locked up 2,000 ft. below sea level in an iron vault/
the human race pulled me outta that space and when they seen the way i was dressed they thought i was a leader of a dyin cault/
so i changed my name to HighDro Bomb/
an for now on my life still goes on/

yo i lived a thousand year n i got a story ta tell
interaction wit many creatures n even wit hell
its surpprizin
i traveled the earths surroundin n even the earths horizin
so this proves that im jus the illest of all time
i got all lines
that go wit all rhymes....

I got a story ta tell x3


yo this my first spit for tha longest time i quite for a while but now im ettin back in the game so tell me wuts up i think some parts was wack but let me know ~1~

I liked this piece right here...nice wordplay and multiez...good flow too...and combined with the vocab it had kinda a canibus type feel yo it nahmean...and since you got a pic of him in ya avatar that's probably not an accident...lol...you must like Can a lot cause you got identical flow and everything...holla...

yea thx son... yea canibus my boy i like the way he raps so i tried ta do his in his for of rap...i dont know imma try ta do alotta songs in his style cuz i like his style ya know but thanx homie

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yo, liked it, it was aight, tha uneven bars screwed up tha flow at times but if i read tha part again it made sense, tha vocab was there and u had some deep wordplay mixed in, i liked it overall, it would be good as an audio, hit ur head on a cloud, naomean? ...

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lol...get 5 science teams...keep the headphones in case i die in my dreams! check this one...i'll kill you so fast it'll heal before you die! nice drop son...keep goin! you write like cannibus, right? and i write like i AM Nas, so how about we put the two illest niggas together?

yo thanx for the feed back homie this my first drop in a while
and ill peep yo shit fa-sho

i think we should make a colab or sumthin ya feel me cuz u got hot shit too so holla at me about that ~1~ an thanx

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