Kind of an Eminem's "KIM"
 

Girls.....Girls.....Girls

Everything's cool we chillin then PMS kicks in
i try to hide, but ya can't hide from ur bitchin
screamin yellin crying, for no god damn reason
ouch fuck, that's my hand ya squeezin
ok chill, calm down beath in, your gonna be alright
i was wrong you were right, there's no need to fight

fuck that....fuck being nice.....i tried

"please baby come here, come hold me"
shut the fuck up slut, i'm tryin to watch tv
"why you gotta be so mean to me, what did i do to you"
you never shut up, you always tellin me what to do
and i'm sick of it bitch,
now your the one who's whipped
go cook me some dinner and quit your bitchin
the fuck are you doing! get in the damn kitchin
"Jamie......please don't be like this"
ok listen, i'm startin to get pissed
just do what i tell you..."b..baby" i don't wanna hear it!
just leave me the fuck alone, "i'm...pregnant"

what! I had protection, you said you were on the pill
"well i'm not....and it's not your's it's bill's"
you fuckin slut, come here so i can shove you
how could you do this to me......i loved you
nevermind, it's doesnt even fuckin matter
cuz in about 5 seconds, blood is gonna splatter
one... two... three... four... five
come out bitch! you can't hide


well that's all i got
kind of a "KIM"
but what can ya do, i got bored
peace

it was good.. but do i sense some hostility towards women marshall.. ;) haha jp it was good

it was tite aight but i probably could've felt it more it tha lines were longer, hit ur head on a cloud...

this topic was ill man the flow was nice..
u had alot of thoughts and u expressed
them nicely! good shit

no doubt

uppin

^I agree.

no doubt this was a nice open mic piece, good vocab, nice flow.....lines could be a few words longer, but ill as hell stilll

7/10.....niceness

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...1884#post761884

thanks yo, i'll add some more to it like y'all told me to do...
peace

uppin