Violent Life
 

As i sit in this chair,
Looking ans listening,
I wondre why,
Why licing is so violent,
Everything is violent,
Music is violent,
Schools are violent,
Households are violent,
The streets are violent,
In the streets people fight,
They can't live their life,
They have to fight,
They can't live a realy life,
No that wouldn't be right,
It wouldn't be right,
To live a peaceful life,
I believe people are afraid,
Afraid of living,
Afraid of talking,
Thinking that talking,
Makes you a punk,
Thinking that walking away,
Makes you gay,
Where is the love,
If you want to fight,
Pick up some boxing gloves,
Do it as a profession,
Not in the streets,
Don't spark the heat,
I can help keep the peace,
Because I speek the peace,
I need help in order to keep the peace.

nice and basic piece
Good topic
You got your point across easily
nice drop tho
keep it up

peace

This was a cool piece nice drop you got ya point across nicely keep dropping mang like Jinkies..1

Fairly blunt. Which i liked. Got the point across well. Though seemed rushed looking at some of the typos and spelling mistakes.

You came at it quite interesting. Using a certain repetitivenss to echoe what was being said. Which had indifferent results (sometimes came off, sometimes didn't)..


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thanks...upppage