my life
 

man i sort of get sick the way i act/
i get so angry and pissed off for no reason and i slam myself as if i got sacked on the dirt/
i got this shiity thing called tourettes/
sometimes i feel like riskin my life at russian roulette/
but i know ill lose cause that is what i have been going/
so much shit i see is just posing/
sometimes i feel so boring and get stressed and dont know what to do/
my mind goes crazy and wild like in a zoo/
people dont know how i feel/
this shit i say aint fake it real/
i get all heated up and feel bad and start to get worse/
this shit is sucks so much i do things that make me force/
i force myself to do shit i dont wanna do but i need to so i can get better at what i want to be/
i wanna be that athlete what you see on tv/
i wanna practice and get better but i get lazy/
i need tyo yell at myself and elevate in rap and basketball/
so i need to get up from crawling/
and stop makin excuses for my stalling/

Nice man, not very good lyrics, but i can feel it...

you know it seems like im ALWAYS giving you feedback...
fla was right... i liked this one not my fav out of all of your but still good... im begging you .. please.. PLEASE.. get like a few more vocab into your open mics... im pleading here

you know whats funny?..I made an open mic titled my life a while back...then I made a part 2..this wasnt as good as mine but it was okay..keep elevatin..and do you wanna battle?..lol..j/p peace...

It was poetic. I was feeling it. You show potential. Keep it up.

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upping for your feedback...
dont sleep... read this...
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i thought it was pretty good, u got potential u just need to elevate a little more, anywho the concept was good, the vocab was aight, and the wordplay was kool.