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tattoo's you'll never loose representing ya thugz most of us have been abused and abusing the drugs Cuz weve lost heart in our families now who can we trust? Our lyrics we bust time to stand up and claim respect back to us. Battered and brusied in my conciousness lifes a test Ive felt better and when im high im the best putting down thoughts of restlessness my mind overheating I cant resperate my chest over weight and a stained vest holding a heavy mind full of endless deapths. It ends stressed on my shoulders like bouders im carrying regrets. All bets are off then the back on again as im releasing emotions through the voice in my pen. Pray for the next gen as we move on up and out I feel sorry for them. |
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...... ah man..... wasn't feeling this yo...
It sounded like a keystyle, probably was... kinda short... right? lol... and pretty simple too... concept was notin that special... and it didn't really flow that good... Bet you can do alot fucking better than this man... you got a good amount of posts... this probably one of your weaker ones... Thas all man, peace |
not bad, but i think you could do better, exspecially from what i have read in the past i exspected something hot, you seemed rushed or something on this, flow was choppy, rhyme scheme was basic, but i think you can do better keep spittin man peace
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