Illynice VS. FOCUS'D
 

20 lines max
i will spit first
no crew or hate votes
due a.s.a.p!

lets go!

aiight spit first holla............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ...............................

YOu probably sat down and wrote this men, your moms lips get fatter than jiggas, and im focused man, i provoke this pen, to lyrically spill you in half/ im the type a dude that will fuckin kill you then laugh/ my lyrics thrill you in raps and have you wrapped in two/ have you smacked -n- brusied.. till you look like a crip bandana.. black -n- blue/ who the fuck you think your rappin too?, son im attacking you with the chrome heat/ im the type a nigga to hit your dome piece/ then hit your jaw so hard that youll shit out your own teeth/ i dont condone beef, with niggas that bust a stink verse/ son you look gayer than sisqo in a pink shirt/

these lyrics i rip graze at you/,and even in a daze i still manage to spit blaze at you/and formoulate venomos rhymes that will have your bitch face tattoed/ your so stupid you wouldnt even know im riifn you even if i flipped a diss phrase at you/

yo son if you dont spit soon.. im not going to agree on this shit.. i thought that youd have your shit posted first

aiight son i dont agree to this battle.. if you post your rhymes just fuck it.. im a holla at one of the moderators cuz i dont want this shit to go down.. this shti is corny.. your sitting down writting your shit..im a use this rhyme in another battle

dowg i wuz doin sumthin a lil more important than this fuckin battle so calm ya ass down and take the ass whoopin like a man..........

My rhymes crack spines, smash vertebrates & drain ya spinal fluid/
Paralyzed, but that's only minor compared to what I fire/
Ill put holes through ya clothes, rewrite my name as the designer/
You don't go to war you protest/
I serve & protect, you hopeless/
Spears from here cause damage severe/
Spheres surround this queer & manage the fear, I suggest you manage to steer clear/
Metamorphic abortions or your rhymes is supported/
Intentionally distorted when I report it, so when you record it its already been placed in orbit/
Your verses is shorter than a black mans life in a horror movie/
Fuckin whore groupie, running at me full force & still cant move me/
Your vision is blurred from this rhythm of words I serve at I submerge/
You earn what you deserve, & you broke so disperse/
Reverse back to before you entered this challenge/
My bars will leave you surrounded & your thoughts clouded, you lack talent/
Battling me, there's "no point" like new pencils/
Ill put sharpened utensils to your temple, & watch as you go blank, like instrumentals/
The first round, so its only right I let the "heat" bust/
Illynice, shit, envy deez nuts....ONE

uppin for votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i dont really agree to this shit.. you fuckin sat down and recited that shit fuck it................................................ .................................................. .................................................. ........

aight i cant vote but focus'd straight up merked dis nigga he had flow punchs wordplay complexity multi's good vocab everything but illy ya need some serious elevation aight kid use will get better but straight up merk by focus if i could vote it would be for focus'd and hit dese up niggas be sleepin on dis shit aight niggas holla


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dunn.. i dont agree on this battle.. i posted my shit.. whilke he was supposed to post his first. i dont agree on this

and what the fuck are you talking bou the used multies?

"My rhymes crack spines, smash vertebrates & drain ya spinal fluid/
Paralyzed, but that's only minor compared to what I fire/
Ill put holes through ya clothes, rewrite my name as the designer"

that shit aint no fuckin mulit rhyme shit my shit is mulit.. i used mulites check it


"son im attacking you with the chrome heat/ im the type a nigga to hit your dome piece/ then hit your jaw so hard that youll shit out your own teeth/ i dont condone beef, with niggas that bust a stink verse/ son you look gayer than sisqo in a pink shirt/"

now those are fuckin multies you dumbass

illynice gets my vote.. the other dude aint have no fuckin mulites.. his rhymes were nursery compared to illnices shit in my opinion

all dat shit them two talkin dont matter......they aint votin and i drop'd one hour after i started da damn thang check da times....man i had shit to do b4 i droped.....dis shit aint my life its for fun so calm ya nerves.......................uppin!!!

Focus'd Took This One.Both Verses Were Kinda Weak But Focus'd Came Stronger With The Punches.Illynice Had A Few Creative Lines But Not Much Else...

Vote-Focus'd

ight, i cant vote for the poles but I'll vote in text

Illynice lacked wordplays and a creativity

started off weak and monotonous
but got better along the way

basic punchlines there

Focus'd

Dont take this anyway mayn but too me the flow was a bit off in some parts

nevertheless, he straight killed it

nice creativity, and nice punches

Your verses is shorter than a black mans life in a horror movie/ (lol)

You don't go to war you protest/ (could have reworded it better, but it had me laughing a bit)

Vote = Focus'd

yo still uppin............................................. .................................................. .......................