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dw. 09-08-03 02:14 PM

dw vs BROOKLYN <<300+ posts 2 vote!
 
10 lines max

all rules n i mean LL no dr's!

brook u spit first dawg!

dw. 09-09-03 01:49 PM

o.k lets go!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!! yo u gonna reply 2 my pm dawg?

BROOKLYN 09-09-03 02:25 PM

!!!NO RECYCLING!!!. . .NOT 1 LINE!
5 Mins. . . .


You Act Like A Bitch, This Ain't A Row - You Can't Leave
You Only Get To Spit Cus I Allow You To Breath
I Attack On The Western Flank To Test Ya Rank
Cut Off Your Facial Features. .Leave Ya Whole Expression Blank
Ego's Swelling So Back Down And Remember This Fight Bitch
If Knowledge Was Power. . .You'd Have An Energy Crisis
I'll Drop Till Ya Scorned I Won't Stop Till You're Mourned
I'm Like Mace, I'm In Your Face More Than Pop Ups On Porn
I'm Mailing This L Fragile With More Volume Than Sony Parcel
More Loses Than Wins, No Wonder Your Name's Only Partial!

dw. 09-09-03 02:49 PM

Im finding it hard to define why this bitch is ere to walk THE GREEN MILE/
U beta be agile 2 dodge my style, u shud press 999 in advance n dial/
75 wins suspicious, lukin at ya victims I take it HERBS can be delicious/
an explosive HELMET 2 watch YA MIND BLOW this is viscious/
BROOKLYN think he the man cos of his HERB record counter/
I have 2 throw cutlery around jus 2 giv him a CLOSE ENCOUNTER/ (flyin saucers)
I CHOKE you on ya own STATUS so u can SWALLOW YA PRIDE/
Stomach makes it a LOW PROFILE but at least we know ya verse came from deep INSIDE/
Leave u a FORD in ya garage so u can keep A GUD FOCUS instead of insane/
BROOKLYN bitch, u only complete a LINE wen u snortin COCAINE/


uppin

dw. 09-09-03 02:54 PM

^^^wtf fuck brooklyn there ain't 1 line there that i av used b4, there maybe some similar stuff from no-show battles but i ain't recyclin!!!

uppin on this!!!!!

dw. 09-09-03 03:20 PM

uppin votes y'all!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ricochet. 09-09-03 05:55 PM

^thats fucked up D....

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Aprentice² 09-09-03 07:52 PM

iight my vote goes to brook 4 obvious reasons his shit was crazy sick. punches vocab everything return the vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=77957

Tonya~Montana 09-10-03 04:42 AM

dw started out nice up until his fifth line...then kinda
got weak...some played punches but they hit so so..
did'nt really come that creative...overall verse kinda
went lackluster and did'nt pick back up....

brook came with betta consistancy...nice starter verse
and punches landed betta...good disses..a lil bit more creative
than his opponent...overall betta verse

vote brooklyn

return and honest vote on any my battles also.........plz

Otherwordz 09-10-03 04:55 AM

yup...my boy BROOKLYN got this...not only for the obvious fact that DW recycled..but BK also had a better more solid verse in termz of punchez, wordplay, multiez, and flow...

K.Largo 09-10-03 08:49 AM

Hmmmmmm who will bribe vote for?..................


lol...brooklyn.............or dw?.












brooklyn u got structure down now.......and your verse seems way more legible than before....and punches stood out.some played but still they seemed good...........so kid props to you.



vote=Brooklyn

phiXion 09-10-03 01:36 PM

brooklyns flow, punches and disses hit harder, therefore i vote for brooklyn.......................................... ........................................

EnVy Ny 09-11-03 03:26 PM

Lemme Break This Down....

Punches-BROOKLYN
Flow-BROOKLYN
Wordplay-DIFFENTLY BROOKLYN
Overall-BROOKLYN

Seems Dw Still Has Some Elevating To Do....Hit Dis Up Thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=79135


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