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COM vs INSANEwhiteboy
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i go first no hate no crew no D/R blah blah |
I’m Erratic, You’re Static, When I’ve Started-You’ve-Had-It
Take The Holes In Your Rhyme And Like Austin-I’ll-Shag-It I’m Drastic, Don’t Mask-it Yo Lines Are Like Elastic (stretched) You Couldn’t ‘Cum’ Deep If You ‘Fucked’ In A Casket Emphatically I Merk-You; Like A Tennis Ball I Serve-You Your Curfew! You Better Run Home Before I Hurt-You I’ll Burst-You-With-Pressure; You’re Cursed-To-Be-Lesser So Confess That I’m Better Coz This Verse-Will-Suppress-Ya I Suggest-That-You-Train, I’ll Maim With Zest-For-The-Game You Need To Gain A Vest For Suggesting-I’m-Lame You’re Repressed I Request You Throw-In-The-Towel You See My Lines And Your Shit Can’t Hold-In-The-Bowel I’m Old-In-The-Mouth And Long-In-The-Tooth Your Remains Will Be Proof That I’ve ‘Bombed’-On-This-Youth |
you've had nearly an hour dawg, c'mon you said it wouldn't take you long to write a rhyme....................... .............
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WHAT A FUCKING BITCH ASS NO SHOW< IMMA MAKE INSANEWHITEBOYS LIFE ON HERE HELL IF HE DONT DROP.......... .............................................. .................................................. .........................
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~you call me elastic but ur shyty like plastic i strecth cuz u niggas cant break me or shake me//
~ur lyrics dont hurt they is jus to weak to come take me// ~yall niggas is fake give me a break u wit talent ha// ~i good puff on a posionious inhalent nd still drop lines to tear up ur rhymes// ~im u 4 times ops times four my lyrics r so good that i dont even need 2 spit nemore// ~u whore i can take u to the floor after 1 line mobody will even remember u nemore// ~they call me insane cuz my rhymes burrow in ur membrain// ~my shit flows heavy like rain u cant even stain my style hide u in da bottom of the nile// ~u been devowered and over come with the power// |
yo this was an average battle so let's break it down:
opener:com finisher:com wordplay:com worth reading:com punches:com my vote goes to com good luck to both y'all cats though |
Lemme Break It Down....
Punches-Com Flow-Com Wordplay-Com Overall-Com Merking....Enough Was Said |
Ight breakdown:
Punches:COM FLOW:COM Wordplay:COM Multis:DEFINETLY COM OVERALL VERSE: WHO THE FUCK U THINK? Vote: COM insane don't feed off others verses and elevate learn bigger words n better wordplay |
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no now enough wuz said.........it wuznt even fair!!!! vote=com |
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COM's Verse Flowed And Had Multies But His Punches Werent That Strong And His Wordplay Slacked A Bit.He Takes This One Tho.Insane Was Too Weak Stop Battling Herbs COM. Vote-COM |
yo im givin it to com if i could vote i thought he came harder then insane w did his punchs hit he had wordplay multis complexity flow insane w ya had some good shit but not good enough for com aight props vote com and hit this battle up fo me niggas be sleepinon it aight niggas holla
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=78568 |
ight, this battle was iiiight
Com had the wordplays and multis, punches not so great that other dude was just straight weak, sorry man, im not gon say it was an okay verse, it lacked in a lot of areas Com had the better shit Vote = Com |
^^^thx for the props and thx to insanewhiteboy for droppin, i realing thought he was gonna pull a no-show, so sorry for trippin dawg, i hate no shows, .....uppin for votes
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Not the strongest battle in the world...
A clear and concise merkin though. Com takes every catagory you can think of. Holla back... Born vs. Envy |
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