The Remix Vs Brooklyn (VERY VERY HEATED)
 

Rules are:
No D/R Votes
No Crew Votes
No Hate Votes
No Biting or Feeding

You Spit First

15 Lines Max

YoungBlood can't vote cuz i heard he always votes for u.....(no beef) just want a fair battle
Ambiguous can't vote because he hates me

That's pretty much it!

Ready for your 7th Loss???????

I'll spit tommorow morning right now i got some homework to do

i don't pre-write... i have homework... that is all............................................... ..

yo im waiting for dese 15 liners till den i would apreciate it if ya told me what ya thought..........
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...=&postid=764163
thnz ..........D

alright man it's morning and i'm checkin' in..........waitin' for you to drop then i'll make my KEYSYLE NOT PRE WRITTEN

Brook let's go no pre-writing it better be a short 15 max.......no extended lines......uppin for his verse............................................. ...........

lol ^ trust me i know i used to do that shit but i keep it simple now................... i'm like xl4real wit the line length now

wtf u doin' writin' a novel? come on man it's a keystyle meaning fast spit!............................

omg! pre-writing it's been 45 minutes!.......................................... ...........................

no i just happen to be homeschooled and i'm on lunch break waiting for your overrated pre-written ass :D

hey no problem brook i'll do the same.............................................. ...........................

ok my verse is ready..........just waitin' for yours..........let's go man i don't got all day...................................i have an outside life

Aim For Ya Oppositions Weakness? Guess Im'a Take Out Ya Whole Spit
Remix Should Quit Like Too Much Sports, Brooklyn Makes Ya Soul Split – [Sole
Ain't No Test, Got Remix Beneath A Shelter Cus He's Feelin Under The Weather
Light As A Feather, Fuck It. .You Ain't Never Gonna Burn Me Like Leather
Beatin Me Never, Ya Whole Styles Played, Remix Just A Brother Clone
Leave Ya Frame Blown, This Wannabe Vet's Just Another Unknown
Remix. .Ya Shit Ain't Flowin Like Cats With Long Lasting Constipation
I Can See Frustration, You A Battle Emcee? I'm Blastin Ya Occupation
Why Ya Battlin Ya Inspiration? Commit Suicide To Even Come Close To Me
Remix A Tight Emcee? Ya Kiddin Yaself Like Belivein In Ghosts Ya Can't See
Brook Leaves Burns To The Third Degree Not Much Chance Of Survivin
Ya Thrivin To Beat Me, Pre-Writes Will Take All Night Like England To France Driving
Must Be Diving Cus The Truth Is Remix Going Down With Played Verses
Visitin Hearses, Fuck You! <--Damn Brooklyn So Talented He Can Fade Curses
Go To See Nurses Cus Ya Face Will Be Fucked From This Near Death Experience
Stretched Multis Better Than None. .Tha Remix Fears My Every Breath. .Brooklyn Clearly Wins!

lol i thought i said no extended lines? well u forced things so this shouldn't be hard............
OVER RATED BIOTCH HERES YOUR DEATH

...:::Brooklyn's 7th Loss:::...
Issuing a loss to Brooklyn colliding wit his seventh L//
This bitch couldn't be "heated" if he fell into "hell"//
You throwin "punches" that "miss" and "metaphores" with absolutely no "wit"//
Only "love" u get is from ya "voters" who "dickride" so "passionate"//
You number one on the top records on rap battles "front-page"//
But this brooklyn "pussy" get "pissed" spit punches it's considered "cunt-rage"//
You couldn't spit good "vocab" if u was hooked-on-phonics//
Bitch still ain't "gangsta" after 3 years of studyin' "ebonics"//
Putting an end to your over rated hype and show u who's real//
"Thoughts" of "aids"...is the only time brook "considered" bein "ill"// (haha)
"Cut" my "name" in 3 pieces just so u could say you "mutilated-me"//
It's over your reputation is "slipping" as if all u had was a "lubricated-leed"//
Brook bitch couldn't spit "hard" if he "swallowed" a "sharp-stone"//
Faggot wanted to be "hard core" so he said he had a "heart-bone"//
Next time you claim to be the best of the elite on this site//
Remember u just a "pre-mature" "jacker" "beatin" "newbies" so he can say he "tight"//

Close ass battle.....

Brooklyn:

U had some solid punches in there and wordplay was on point as usual, but I feel u came a lil bit soft on this one, punches wasn't hittin hard as they usually do, plus a verse lacked personals I only seen like a couple..........

Best Bars:
Why Ya Battlin Ya Inspiration? Commit Suicide To Even Come Close To Me
Remix A Tight Emcee? Ya Kiddin Yaself Like Belivein In Ghosts Ya Can't See
^nice Punch there...

Remix. .Ya Shit Ain't Flowin Like Cats With Long Lasting Constipation
I Can See Frustration, You A Battle Emcee? I'm Blastin Ya Occupation
^one of your better personals in this battle, nice punch...



Remix:

Started a lil basic at the beginning but got better as it progressed....Punchlines were a lil soft but the Personals hit em the hardest...

Best Bars:

Putting an end to your over rated hype and show u who's real//
"Thoughts" of "aids"...is the only time brook "considered" bein "ill"//

Nice Wordplay on that one..

Cut" my "name" in 3 pieces just so u could say you "mutilated-me"//
It's over your reputation is "slipping" as if all u had was a "lubricated-leed"//
^Nice hard hittin personal


Vote = Remix simply becuz he had more personals and his flow was a lil better.....Overall good battle props to both.....

Seriously. .

Brooklyn's Multi's Seemed Stretched And Forced To Me, A Lot Of It Was Bragging Or Plain Filler, And What Was This:

^ A 'Shit' Line?! Come On man, Your Supposed To Ber A Vet, You Must Know ALL Shit Lines Are Played As Fuck Nowadays Man. .
I Liked The 'Fade Curese' Thing, But that Wasnt Really Dissing Your opponent, It was More Meaningless Filler That looked Good In My Opinion.
The Remix: Not The Best Verse Ever, But You Had At Least Wordplay And Sttayed Dissing Your Opponent,. Which Is What battlings About. And That Last Line Personal Actually Made Me laugh, I Think Brooklyn Let Himself Down here By Not Coming With many Punches, Its Like He Underestimated You And You Can And Pulled An Upset And Won.

Vote: Tha Remix