Talent- Diamond Mindz - Peep
 

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Attained 'Chronological Knowledge' I've learned all that 'Time Teaches'
Forming the 'Peices', Cause me to Force Feed you my 'Thesis'
'Echo's of 'Potent Words' Left 'Immersed in my Verbs' Lone Soldier 'Provokin Herds'
Seperate your Mind, Body, and Soul Your 'Whole' is broken to 'Thirds'
You 'Assert'n Words' Cause 'Retracting Claps Noise Relapse's Back to 'Silence'
I 'Harm with No Purpose' like 'Random Acts of Violence'
'Recently', It 'Seems to Be' like a Society comprised of 'Clones of Whack'
The 'Bone-less Backed' cant 'Stand' to mines and escape with 'Hope Intact'
'No Joke thats Fact', Bound to leave my battle threads either 'Choked or Slapped'
'You compared to Me' is Incomprehensible like the 'Pope on Crack'
My brain's the 'Source of Creativity',You could say I 'Spawned your Taste'
Various claims, but mostly distorted the "True" have been 'Mis-Placed'
Yall are 'Rooks' like 'Chess', Ive been yet to be Impressed and I'm 'Still Waiting'
It's like I'm 'Attending a School full of Idiots' the way these 'Kids are D-Grading'
From the 'Information I've Gathered', Most my words would shift the 'Location of ya Bladder'
As far as my crew? 'You can't Touch Us' like Decendents of 'MC Hammer'
Your Every 'Dream' captured In a 'Beam' at the end of a Tunnel, watch me 'Detain Your Light'
It's like eyez 'Affixed on a Decaying Poem' the way 'Diamond Mindz dominate this site"

I liked the wordplay. "I 'harm with no purpose' like 'random acts of violence'. That was sick! It was strong from start to finish. And you was representing. You're still on fire dog. Keep 'em coming.

Thanks, !!! for your opinion

TIGHT PEACE TWIN

No other way to say it....................NICE.................

Nice drop man, sweet metaphores and good flow..............
Keep up the goods.....


PEACE~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~>

tHANKS FOR YOUR OPINIONS !

now this shit is better...your metas was nice...rhyme scheme more on point this time...nice drop duke


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