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J.Dubya vs shockthaworld
no dr
no hate no crew no bite no prewritten 40 mins to spit you spit 1st |
How many Lines !!.
.'.'.'.'..'.'''.'.'.'.'.'. lol you didnt list that kid...... . . . . . . . . . |
forget it nevermind it doesnt matter alright
I'll be done soon quick Murder !!! Im the hottest thing out !! |
sorry, unlimited now I guess...
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well just try to Match My Verse
LOL but knowing you - your verse will probably be 3 pages .. . . . |
Im the hottest thing out.., Look Verbally Abuse-Fools That Refuse-To-Lose Against Me ..Slip-Noose.. |Label Ya Pores A Myth| With |Tatoos Of A Legend| Coated With Ya Blood-Juice ..
|Chew This Loose newbie|., |Like Ya Avy, Mate|.. Translate Jd’s Life-Line And Increase The Stats Of Death-Rates.. Smack Ya |Noggin’ With An Almanac| And Shift Ya |Mind Of State| .. No-Need-To-Hate.. Flows-Feed-Your-Fate.. Bleed-Yo-face.. Ima See 2 it, Ya Dr’s Can’t Save-Your-Case..Its 2 Late, I Left Ya |Suckin’ Bics|, The Way shock Gon |Erase-Yo-Taste| .. Placed This Waste At Death’s Gates.. Paced Endurance.. My Chants Send-u-in-trance.. Flash’d Life In Glance.. I’m So Advanced To |Re-Arrange Ya Persepective| Quicker Than |Blind Transplants| .. Knock The Static Off Ya Pants.. Chance, You Can’t Grasp-it.. Goddamnit, I’ll Make You Drool To A Star Just To Reek Havoc On This Planet.. Like |J-Kidd’s Throwback|, shock Left Ya |Heart To The Net| .. Cart-Yo-Carcass In Sets.. Place Bets As-Far-As Ya Left Without Senses..Breast-Fed Still Smuthered In Cleavages.. Post-Battle Jd Gon Be |Covered In More Blood| Than |Aborted Fetuses| .. |
Watch the gauge raise on my rage like an animal caged
I'll rock you so hard, you'll think this was the stone age/ My words are so tight, they haven't yet been uncurled you could blow earth up, but still wouldn't shockthaworld/ This aint a debate-this is your fate, there's no time to wait your flow had no pound, how can you be a heavy weight?/ Yeah, you did live next door, to me, but ya don't anymore cause my verbs were to hardcore for a whack ass whore/ How the fuck you say you gonna "erase my taste"? Ya didn't even write that verse, you just had to copy-n-paste/ Those strecthed lines don't mean shit, I see them all the time They're taking to big of steps, and are in a field of land mines/ .................................................. ....................... ^Look at those bullet holes that not even I can control It's like I'm playing hockey and hittin you is my goal/ Ya shit had no structure, how's it gonna survive an earthquake? All it will take is a little shake to cause ya foundation to break/ I hear you mumbling under your breath, "damn this is a merk" I'ma erase that smirk, you's a jerk who need to go back to welfare work |
Uppin,, Good Battle
You came harder than I exspected !!! . .'.'.'.'.'.'.' '.'.'.'1.'.'.'.'. .'.'..'.'.'.'.'....'. |
my votes goes to shock
better flow, vocab and punches Dubya came nice, and easy, flow was there, but punches didn't hit as hard peace............................................. ... please drop an honest vote here http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...4417#post764417 |
im votin for dubya cause it was punchlines line after line, i couldnt really flow with shock cause he has so many line things it confuesed me.
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Wow your dumb !!
see thats why i hate postin in regular frontlines half of these people cant READ shit is horrible !! |
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^I agree 100% For some reason anytime some one uses strecthed lines everyone things it's the shit. Look at both mc's structures and flow, J Dubya's was right on compared to the other guy's. I can't vote but it would be for J Dubya. PROPS MAN! |
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