Cuatro Desperados
 

Ridin with my 3 brothers, but my best friends my gun-
all are individuals, but descisions are made as one\
We dont know where we goin, we just roam aimlessley-
watching eachothers backs, to stay out-of-chans-you-see\
Cause if one of us falls, then we all fall together-
no matter where we are, no matter how the weather\
Ridin into towns, fuckin all the senioritas-
we the biggest outlaws, but the people flock ta meet us\
You should see how they treat us, talkin like were western gods-
at least one duel a day, but we always beat the odds\
When we step inta bars, they all stop and look-
like theyre seein heroes or legends that stepped out a book\
But like they say, dont judge us by the cover-
i'd do anything, even risk my life to save my brothers\
So if you mess with one, then you mess with all four-
and you dont want the four brother kickin down your front door\

original concept...mechanics werent 100% perfect but well above average..i dont know if its your structure or what but the story didnt quite seem to flow for me...

however, its originality gave you bonus points.

Cody is gay

8/10

BAX SAID WHAT COULD BE SAID

^^thx... anyone have anything else to say?

^^thx... anyone have anything else to say?

7/10 nice drop